| Title: Chapter 38: Fatherhood is Overrated.
| 10 Jan 2011 2:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Marilyn Coerra (Anonymous)
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Sorry to pint out - but "advisement" is wrong - it's "advice". There are some more small errors in the document, which you'll notice if you look closely.
Otherwise it's gr8, as no doubt you've been told already.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I am glad you like the story but I am afraid I am going to have to disagree with you on my use of 'advisement'; it means to take under careful consideration. It is the sort of word that I feel Severus would use. If you read the sentence again, you will see that 'advice' does not fit. And I doubt there is a fanfiction anywhere out there that does not have small errors scattered hither and yon, but I do try my best (as did my beta) and I pride myself in my vocabulary.
Lesley~