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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
Author's Response: Thank you. Good to hear from you again. Lesley
Author's Response: What a lovely review, thank you so much. Thank you for letting me know that you are reading and enjoying ASD so much. I have no plans to abandon the story, nor, at this stage to finish it. Lesley
I would like to state my opinion that I enjoy long stories and long chapters as I feel that the character and plot developments most often are more thought through and therefore more cohesive. ASD is a wonderful story with lots of little details which make the story entertaining and thought provoking. Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. Another vote for long chapters. Yay. I am very glad that you are enjoying ASD so much. Hope to hear from you again. Lesley
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in replying to you. Thank you for your review. Glad you liked the chapter so much. Lesley~
I'm really enjoying the story so far ^^ Author's Response: Thank you so much. First reviewer for this chapter. I seem to be incapable of writing short chapters. This chapter is shorter than my usual, and I have decided to try and cut them down to between five and six thousand words, instead of eight to ten, and occasionally twelve. But I am glad you prefer a decent length chapter. And I am glad that you are enjoying the story. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed both chapters. Lesley
:D PS: sorry for my awful English... Author's Response: Thank you guignou for your lovely review. Sorry you were disappointed in the last chapter though. Didn't like all of that confrontation, I suppose. As to your question...no, nobody has asked me if they can translate the story for me, in any language. And your English is fine, better than some whose first language is English, in fact. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Sorry you don't like Ginny. I adore her and think she and HArry are fantastic together, though it took him a while to realise she was a girl, just like it did Ron with Hermione. It truly amazes me what Ginny ever did to inspire such hatred in people. Was it the little ten year old girl who had heard stories of the Boy Who Lived being a little star dtruck on platform 9 3/4? Or perhaps the stupid 11 year old girl who was tricked by the future Dark Lord into opening her heart. We hardly saw her in POA or GOF. She appears here and there in OOTP. Perhaps that is why? She isn't in it much and suddenly, Harry fancies her. But he would have seen her around the school all the time, just not registered her as potential girlfriend material, for all the reasons he stresses over once he doess register she is a girl. Cho was only mentioned here and there also. Is it that she is a redhead and she is too similar to Harry's mother? That doesn't make sense either. 1: she has brown eyes and not the much vaunted green eyes that Lily had, and 2: if she was a brunette, would you be able to say that I wonder, as 80% of people would be true brunettes.
Anyway, this is an argument that gets me going, in case you haven't realised that. I hope you can look past Ginny to continue with the story, because she will continue to feature. Sorry. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Glad you are still enjoying the characters and the story. Lesley |
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