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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
Author's Response: As quick as I can. Thanks for expressing your satisfaction in such an emphatic way!!!!!!!! Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you very much for this review. And I look forward to hearing from you again. Glad that you are enjoying ASD so much. Lesley
Author's Response: Well Harry has certainly got a temper and a lot of stubborness buried in that small frame, but IMO, at this point in time, he is entitled to his anger. Se treated him terribly whilst imparting truly devastating news. But Harry is also very needy, and he is not, in the long run, going to 'cut off his nose to spite his face'. thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it. Lesley
I really enjoyed the little fun moments like Harry fooling around with Ginny and Ron. That was refreshing. And I enjoyed Harry's chat with Dumbledore. My that boy has a bit of a temper, doesn't he? Wonder where he got that from? :oP I'm glad Albus was able to talk with him though. At least he tried to get through to him. And I really really loved the talk at the end with Severus. I liked how he was trying already to care for Harry, like when he tried to get him to eat the scone. That was nice. And I was so pleasantly surprised that Severus made such an offer to Harry at the end there and he was so nice about it. And I enjoyed how Severus kept his temper and allowed Harry his questions. It was all simply lovely. I am really curious as to what Harry will have to say to that final declaration from Severus. Author's Response: Hi Tabitha, Glad you liked the chapter. Sev is being a good boy, isn't he? Wonder how long it can last, especially with all the provocation that HArry is dredging up. I certainly hope Harry accepts the olive branch and the offer of a father before he pushes Sev so far that he loses his temper. heehee. I knew you would like the HArry/Ginny moments. I think poor HArry definitely needs time out to be a teenage boy, all the way to playing around with his girlfriend. I have had a couple of people say they think Ginny is too forward. Yeah, Harry is a bit down on Dumbles at the moment, but of course, as soon as he sees Albus the next time, he will be remorseful. That's just HArry. I have a son like that. He yells and rants and raves and storms off, but then within an hour, he is back apologising. He cannot stand us being at loggerheads. He has even texted me to tell me he is sorry! so I know if Harry apologises to Albus, it is not beyond belief that he be remorseful Thanks for the review...you seem to prefer reading on P&S these days. Waiting impatiently to see what has happened to Remus. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing now. I'm very glad you found the story and are enjoying it enough to review. Yes, HArry is very much Sev's son on the stubbornness stakes, that's for sure. Unfortunately, Sev can see that many of Harry's 'bad' traits seem to come directly from HIM. Harry's temper is very much a Sev trait. But Stubbornness can also be good in some circumstances.
Yes, HArry most definitely should not have gone to GH. But he was not entirely aware of what he was doing. It was an instinctual thing after the shocking news he had just recieved. And don't think there won't be a guilt trip there for him as he will blame himself for Remus almost being overcome by the dementors. Hope to hear from you again. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you. And I do intend to keep writing. Some chapters just might be a little slower than others though because unfortunately, real life keeps getting in the way. Lesley
I love this line: "The anger that he had tried to whip up outside, faded in the face of Harry's obvious wariness..." I love that even despite his best efforts he can't be too furious. Yay Severus! "Say hi to Voldemort for me..." Awww, Harry. Poor Harry. I hope Severus talks to him, although I suppose it will have to wait until after he sees Voldy (though he could decide not to go...yes do that!) Okay, fine you can write what you want, I suppose. *pouts* I really can't wait to see the talk between them. I am awfully anxious, Lesley, so get typing please! :o)
Author's Response: I'm on to it Keina. Lesley
Author's Response: Thanks Alexis, once again for a great review. Lesley
Author's Response: I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story and that you like the way I have Sev and HArry interacting. I couldn't write Sev unless he was his usual, snarky self. In fact, when I have to write him at least trying to be nice or concerned for HArry in any way, I can't help but feel it is all wrong. Still, the relationship has to progress. I hope i can continue to keep Snape in character but still have him and HArry drawing closer. Thanks for the review and I hope you continue to enjoy. Lesley |
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