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Reviews For A Shocking Discovery
I suspected that Nott was the one that poisoned Harry, but why was Draco there? Did he help out in some way? Post more soon! Author's Response: Thank you Midnight Oil for your review, I am glad you like the way I allowed Sev to be HArry's father. I like reading Sev is HArry's father fics but the only down side of them is the fact that either lily or james are painted in a bad light. I LOVE the lily/james romance and I absolutely hate lily being a slut or cheating on james because they have a fight. I hate james being depicted as a womaniser...well you get my drift. Draco was at the meeting so he could be branded but also to see an example of exactly what happens when Volde is displeased. And Volde is already displeased with the Malfoys. Draco knew nothing of nott's plans to poison Harry. Hope you enjoy upcoming chapters. Lesley
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will. Lesley.
Harry's breakdown in this chapter is heartwrenching. How ironic that he thinks he would be better off dead since he is without parents when his real father stands inches away from him unable to speak truth but not longer unwilling to act for his son. Author's Response: Thank you for your awesome review!. It truly is humbling to know that I can write well enough to know that some people actually are clenching their jaws, or biting their nails or sitting on the edge of their seats wondering what is going to happen next. You have really taken the characters to heart and sharing everything they are botth going through. Thank you for that. And yes, I agree, it is ironic that Hary is so very down when happiness stands before him if he but knew it. But, the path to acceptance on both sides, for Sev still hasn't totally accepted the fact of Harry being his son, is going to be rocky. I hope you stay with me for the journey. Lesley.
Author's Response: Thank you caro for your kind words. I hope you continue to enjoy. Lesley
I hope Sev isn't in too much trouble for his delay. Author's Response: Another review muchly appreciated. But despite your dedication, I am afraid that you will have to wait to see waht happens to Sev. I always like to think that Dudders would have come good and that he and Hary would have a relationship of some sort. Hope to hear from you again Lesley
Author's Response: Hmmm, I wonder why you think Snape has no idea about how Harry is treated at the Dursleys. Don't forget he nursed HArry and saw all the scars on his body. Not to mention tht he did get an inkling about how HArry was treated (Though he couldn't have cared less) by some of the things he saw during Occlumency lessons. I am glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to do so. Lesley
keep up the good work you know its good when your readers rant and get emotionally involved.. Author's Response: Yes. I do love it when my readers get seriously involved...
Thanks for the review. Unfortunately, Harry hasn't got much choice about returning to the Dursleys. He can be rebellious, yes, but he really isn't stupid. He knows he needs as much protection as he has access to.
But don't worry. The cavalry, is on hand to keep things under control this time.
Author's Response: Thanks Alexis. Glad you waited patiently for the update. Only three more chaps to go though before i run out of finished material. After that, your updates will depend on my muse. Next chapter is pure Dursley but you will have to read it to find out who takes Harry. LOL. Thank you for your compliments. Lesley
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