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Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 13 Feb 2008 8:47 am
Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just discovered this story, and love it! Your explanation of how Severus can be Harry's father is original and clever--it lets Severus in while not breaking up what Lily and James had.

    I suspected that Nott was the one that poisoned Harry, but why was Draco there? Did he help out in some way?

    Post more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Midnight Oil for your review,

     I am glad you like the way I allowed Sev to be HArry's father. I like reading Sev is HArry's father fics but the only down side of them is the fact that either lily or james are painted in a bad light. I LOVE the lily/james romance and I absolutely hate lily being a slut or cheating on james because they have a fight. I hate james being depicted as a womaniser...well you get my drift.

     Draco was at the meeting so he could be branded but also to see an example of exactly what happens when Volde is displeased. And Volde is already displeased with the Malfoys. Draco knew nothing of nott's plans to poison Harry.

     Hope you enjoy upcoming chapters.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 09 Feb 2008 6:27 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, great chapter! Please continue soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, and I will.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 15: The Wrath of Lord Voldemort 09 Feb 2008 2:21 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story. I've enjoyed the slow progression that Severus and Harry have endured. The scene with both of them experiencing Voldemort's wrath was amazingly detailed and breathtaking. I really was clenching jaw imaging the mental machinations Severus was capable of to cut off pain perception while assisting Harry. The man is fearless.
    Harry's breakdown in this chapter is heartwrenching. How ironic that he thinks he would be better off dead since he is without parents when his real father stands inches away from him unable to speak truth but not longer unwilling to act for his son.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your awesome review!. It truly is humbling to know that I can write well enough to know that some people actually are clenching their jaws, or biting their nails or sitting on the edge of their seats wondering what is going to happen next.

    You have really taken the characters to heart and sharing everything they are botth going through. Thank you for that.

    And yes, I agree, it is ironic  that Hary is so very down when happiness stands before him if he but knew it. But, the path to acceptance on both sides, for Sev still hasn't totally accepted the fact of Harry being his son, is going to be rocky.

    I hope you stay with me for the journey.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 14: Return to Hell. 05 Feb 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm really glad Dudley has changed for the better. If only his parents could too... yeah like that'll ever happen!
Title: Chapter 14: Return to Hell. 04 Feb 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooh lovely long chapter, I adore this fic!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you caro for your kind words.

     I hope you continue to enjoy.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 14: Return to Hell. 04 Feb 2008 12:55 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoa... Good job with Dudley. After his comment in DH I can so easily see those being his memories with the Dementors.

    I hope Sev isn't in too much trouble for his delay.

    Author's Response:

    Another review muchly appreciated. But despite your dedication, I am afraid that you will have to wait to see waht happens to Sev.

     I always like to think that Dudders would have come good and that he and Hary would have a relationship of some sort.

    Hope to hear from you again

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 13: Fight and Flight. 03 Feb 2008 8:37 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmmmm, that means that he has to go there even this summer… and Snape might not like that idea either, especially if he had any inkling about how Harry is treated there… But he has no idea… at least not yet ; ). That sounds really fun, nice twist. I knew Dursleys would come up eventually, in a way or another. I´m glad it is in this way. Because especially now if Harry goes there, Snape might change his mind about the decision not the tell Harry more. That sounds real intriquing. I sure enjoyed that chappy ; ) I´m looking forward into next chappy!

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm, I wonder why you think Snape has no idea about how Harry is treated at the Dursleys. Don't forget he nursed HArry and saw all the scars on his body.

    Not to mention tht he did get an inkling about how HArry was treated (Though he couldn't have cared less) by some of the things he saw during Occlumency lessons.

    I am glad you are enjoying the story and I hope you continue to do so.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 13: Fight and Flight. 31 Jan 2008 4:49 am
Reviewer: Huntresss (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd say SCREW them if I was Harry. Abuse from them doesn't give mean any reason to protect them. Albus and Severus both should know better than send Harry back to the abuse... they are complete bastarts and if I was Harry family or not i wouldn't forgive them. They aren't the one being starved or beaten on after all so i guess it really doesn't matter.

    keep up the good work you know its good when your readers rant and get emotionally involved..

    Author's Response:

    Yes. I do love it when my readers get seriously involved...

     

    Thanks for the review. Unfortunately, Harry hasn't got much choice about returning to the Dursleys. He can be rebellious, yes, but he really isn't stupid. He knows he needs as much protection as he has access to.

     

    But don't worry. The cavalry, is on hand to keep things under control this time.

Title: Chapter 13: Fight and Flight. 30 Jan 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I was just starting to wonder when Harry would go back to the Dursleys and now I have my answer. I really hope Snape is the one to drop him off though... that would be very interesting to see have him meet the Dursleys. Keep up the great writing and I look forward tor eading more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Alexis. Glad you waited patiently for the update.

    Only three more chaps to go though before i run out of finished material. After that, your updates will depend on my muse.

    Next chapter is pure Dursley but you will have to read it to find out who takes Harry. LOL.

    Thank you for your compliments.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 26 Jan 2008 12:04 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    My review got out of hand and was too long, so I sent it in an e-mail. If you didn't get it, check your spam folder :)
    L-S

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