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Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 25 Jan 2008 1:56 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hmmm, this chapter left such s strange feeling in my soul. cannot put my finger on why. *might be back later when I sort my feelings*
    Update soon, pls. Lil Sun

    Author's Response:

    Hmmm, I don't know what to say to this. Is the strange feeling good or bad? I am on tenterhooks waiting for you to sort out your feelings.

    I will be away over the next couple of days, so I won't be updating till I get back.

    It is Australia Day tomorrow, (26th) and Monday is the public holiday. I won't be back until Monday evening

    Sorry.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 25 Jan 2008 9:19 am
Reviewer: Huntresss (Signed) [Report This]
    this is awesome... I do hope they get over the feeling of enmity soon and atleast get along as cousins.

    I am waiting still to see what dumbledore does to the dursley's for their excessive treatment of harry?!?! are you going to be working it in?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Huntresss. our words are very much appreciated.

    The Dursleys will feature in late chapters but I will not give anything away here. You'll have to keep reading. heehee!

    I'd love to hear what you think of later installments.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 25 Jan 2008 5:13 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked this chapter! I enjoyed reading about Severus' past and how his mother left the Potters for her husband. It's a shame Snape wasn't able to confess that he is more than Harry's cousin but I suppose that would have been a lot for Harry to take in on one day. Great work so far and I can't wait to read what happens next!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Alexis. I can always rely on you for a review!

    Glad you enjoyed Severus's history.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 12: Half a Truth is Better Than None. 25 Jan 2008 5:01 am
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Such a wonderful chapter! Both so in character! Brought a lump to my throat - and now I'm most anxious to see Harry's reaction when Severus drops the other BIG shoe!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for another review.

    Glad you are still enjoying A Shocking Discovery.

    It will be a while before Snape gets up the nerve to reveal ALL to HArry. I think it is a matter of 'if HArry doesn't know, he, Severus can ignore the facts.'

     I look forward to hearing from you again.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 11: Confession 25 Jan 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HI there, first of all sory, because although I thought 'this story has earned far more reviews than there are.' I was lazy and didn´t review. So I'll do it now to tell you: I really love this wonderful, amazing and well thought out story and hope that all readers will be able to enjoy many more chapters and (hopefully) many more stories in general.
    Greetz, your Melfis.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your kind words.

    I must admit that a few more reviews would be lovely but i know most people read the stories posted and don't bother to review. I did the same thing for a long time, but since writing my own stories, I try to review most of what I read. Aurthors DO like feedback.

    Anyway I am glad that you took the time out to drop a few lines and I am very glad that you are enjoying the story.

    Cheers, Lesley

Title: Chapter 6: Affirmative Action 24 Jan 2008 4:14 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice twist on the Severitus angle. I'm enjoying your story.

    I must confess that when Harry called Snape "Dad" I just about lost my coffee in laughter. Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you CeeCeeMee for your review.

    I'm very glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope you get a few more laughs.

Title: Chapter 11: Confession 22 Jan 2008 10:25 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Signed) [Report This]
    It should have been herr30; it should have been her that ended up with Harry in Rowling´s books. You intending to do any pairings? Whether yes or not I sure am happy that he got to see his friends. The r0;bonding processr1; is going quite nice way ; ). Not too slow but not too quick either. I like your writing style overall and sure am looking forward to the new chappy!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review though i have to tell you that a fair bit of it was illegible to me as i am not a great proponent of computerese.

    If what you are saying is you think harry should have ended up with hermione, i am afraid I entirely disagree. If harry had married hermione, they would have killed each other beofre the first year was out as hermione cannot stand not being the boss and harry would very quickly get over that.

    I do not understand what you mean by am i intending to do any pairings as it is clear that I have paired harry and ginny and ron and hermione.

    and if the r0;bonding processr1; means you like how sev and harry are going on, then thank you.

    I would love to hear from you again in future but could you please print in the Queen's English the next time.

Title: Chapter 11: Confession 21 Jan 2008 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Doewke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like where this is going!! Let the magic preform its work...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Doewke. Glad to hear from you and hope the story continues to please.

    Would love to hear from you again.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 11: Confession 21 Jan 2008 6:16 pm
Reviewer: Little Sun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a surprise for Harry - as he had been told all the time that Dursleys were his only living relatives. I wonder how he will react...
    (to Nott comment: I know Malfoys are rich all the times, I just thougth that Draco might say someting like, well MY father will be out of A soon, cause we have lots of money, unlike YOU. :) I guess I always see the worst in Draco) For Nott if Draco died, it could be an advantage, he would be the most clever DE novice)) Nott seems to me a lot like Snape, I am sorry to hear he still believes in Voldemort´s doctrine))
    Anyway. I am looking forward to the next part. And to some DE activity etc.
    Lil Sun

    Author's Response:

    Hi again.

    I think you must be a Theodore Nott fan. I once saw in a JK Rowling interview that she once thought of giving Nott a much bigger part than just his being mentioned a time or two.

    And you're right. I never thought of it before but he  IS like Snape, isn't he? A loner, surly, clever. But Severus had Lily even if she was a Gryffindor and even if (IN canon) it was only until their OWLs, but at least he had someone.

    In my story, Nott is a total loner. As for Voldemort...Nott believes in whatever his Dad believes in. His mind will most definitely be changed after the events of chapter 15! You will have to wiat and see what happens. (Evil laugh!)

Title: Chapter 11: Confession 21 Jan 2008 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter! I am really glad to see that Snape is finally admitting the truth. Question is, how will Harry react to it...

    Author's Response:

    Yes, well...Snape is on the cusp of a confession...but exactly what is he confessing?

    Harry's reaction...well, let's just say that Severus's temper definitely lives on!

    Thanks for taking the time, once again, to review.

    Lesley.


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