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Title: Chapter 10: My Son and I 21 Jan 2008 11:28 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, fantastic chapter!! i'm afraid i'm a little behind on chapters, so I have to go back and read the earlier ones, but this one was great!
Title: Chapter 10: My Son and I 20 Jan 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my... Snape has quite the temper! Nice long chapter and the constant updates are way cool!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I agree. Very bad temper, but the fact of his just having seen himself in a furious Harry didn't do much for the man's equilibrium.

    The fact that HArry's least pleasant traits seem to be Snape's contribution to his makeup is more than a little disconcerting.

    Thanks for another review.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 10: My Son and I 20 Jan 2008 12:06 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is not making much of a progress, heehee. It is fun to read, though. Thank you for writing :) Lil Sun

    Author's Response:

    It is a slow process, definitely.

    Glad you're enjoying the story so much.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 9: Congratulations! You're a father. 20 Jan 2008 11:35 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    You keep adding chapters quicklier than I read them, wow. Lil sun
    (I hope it is not forbidden to review twice)

    Author's Response:

    It seems that it is OK to review more than once on the same chapter because you were able to do it.

    As to the speed of the updates--things will slow down, so enjoy it while you can. I have written up to chapter 16.

Title: Chapter 9: Congratulations! You're a father. 20 Jan 2008 11:33 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi You left us hanging quite nicely, you wicked :) I wonder if Harry will request to be removed from Snape's care and reconvalescence at Weasleys.
    (TO ch. 7 comment: of course I know Nott is horribly angry with Harry; I guess I thought that everyone lapped immediately on the explanation Nott-killing-Harry and writers usually pretend something is clear and then voila everything is different. I mean Nott could be as angry at Draco as he was at Harry; I guess he is jelaous not to be rich enough and he could be angry that his father faithfully followed Voldemort for so long but stayed poor anyway and now was in prison. I think your talking about Nott being very intelligent and enigma made me think he would see through Voldemorts demagogy. Oh, don't mind me, it is just my wild brain on caffeine :) Sorry.) Lil sun

    Author's Response:

     

    Yeah, I can see why you might think that Nott has other hang ups that make him just as angry as he is at Harry.

    But Nott has lived with the fact that the Malfoys are rich and his family is not (the Malfoy's were rich long before Lucius joined Voldemort's ranks) for a long time and though it rankles, it is not something he would kill over, even though Draco is far from his favourite person.

    Nott worships his father and therefore his incarceration at the hands of HArry Potter is more than he can stand. And he soesn't totally blame Voldemort for their poverty, because they were poor before. If his father believes in the Dark Lord's doctrine, Theodore does also.

    I do appreciate your take on things though. I think that is what fanfic is all about really. Everyone has their own ideas.

    Hope to hear from you again after  next chapter.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 8: Beware, Hagrid! 20 Jan 2008 11:00 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! I like fierce Ginny, she is so much like her mother :) Lil Sun

    Author's Response:

    I agree. Ginny is a little dynamo, just like her mother.

    I love Ginny and I think she is great for Harry.

    Lesley.

Title: Chapter 9: Congratulations! You're a father. 20 Jan 2008 9:16 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooo... what will Snape say to Harry's question? Perhaps he will mentione the truth for once and confess exactly what that potion was for?
Title: Chapter 8: Beware, Hagrid! 20 Jan 2008 3:29 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent just excellent.

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story so much.
Title: Chapter 8: Beware, Hagrid! 20 Jan 2008 2:58 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Seems like Severus might have a bit of a drinking habit... Great ending to the chapter! Everyone is probably going to turn and stare at Snape for his last comment. Great work and I hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response:

    No, not really. He usually stops short of inebriation because he can't stand not to be in total control.

    At the moment, the world that he knows is crumbling around his ears. He needs a crutch.

    Thanks for yet another review. Glad you are still enjoying.

Title: Chapter 7: Gryffindor vs Slytherin 19 Jan 2008 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Little Sun (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi! I like this story very much! It is a good idea with the blood transfusion. Majority of time you have Harry and Severus nicely in canon character, from time to time you are slipping (Snape not reacting to Harry's very rude comments etc), but not too often, so that is OK. I hope you will update soon, because I am really curious what will happen, if the jewel poisoned was meant for Harry or for who it was intended (it crossed my mind that maybe Nott wanted to poison Malfoy for some reason or other), if Harry will go to Dursleys or not, etc. etc. I am looking forward reading more of your story. Ups, I guess the comments are not supposed to be so long. LilSun

    Author's Response:

    Hi Little Sun,

    I love long reviews, so it is not a problem. I think most authors would prefer long reviews.

    I have tried very hard to keep Sev and Harry in character and I think I have mostly succeeded if you can get past the fact that in canon, I am sure that Sev would NEVER accept HArry.

    The poisoned Knarl was definitely meant for HArry and you will see the consequences of that in later chapter. Nott senior is in Azkaban with Malfoy et all becuase of Harry, and so Theodore is not happy.

    You will have to wait to see any Dursleys.

    Hope to hear from you again.


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