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Title: Chapter 38: Fatherhood is Overrated. 19 Apr 2009 8:21 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I always enjoy reading your chapters. I do agree with Harry about the kissing. I mean they weren't even near the other two at the time and no conversations were happening then.

    Author's Response:

    LOL...I have had several different opinions about HArry and Ginny kissing. I think a lot of people forget what it is like to have been a teenager and in love. HArmione had her book and Ron was daydreaming. They had all been talking before Sev invaded the Great HAll. Sev eas in a bad mood..he took it out on HArry and Ginny.

    Thanks for your review.

    Lesley~

     

Title: Chapter 38: Fatherhood is Overrated. 19 Apr 2009 6:50 pm
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story and I also have it on alert and one of my favorites on fanfiction.net. I loved this chapter as Severus is really coming more like a father than he cares to admit. The discussion at dinner was very well done and I like that Harry became like any other teenager when discussing "sex" with his father. Well dnoe.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you angeleye68 for a lovely review. Had you already read this over at fanfic? I forgot to upload it here at the same time. Glad you enjoyed it, wherever you read it.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 38: Fatherhood is Overrated. 19 Apr 2009 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ah! A new chapter! :D I was very happy to see that you updated—most of my favorite stories haven't been recently. I heartily enjoyed this installment. And though Harry's embarrassment makes me feel bad for him, I think it's good for Snape to bring things of this nature up. And I do kind of think it is rude for two people to be kissing in front of their friends like that. Very awkward for everyone else, haha! It's like when you're talking to someone and the whole time they're draped around their significant other. Kind of kills the conversation, lol.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for anothr lovely review. Sorry this has taken so long to update. I forgot to post it over here until last night. Slack, I know. Sev undoubtedly was speaking his mind, but do not forget that he was already in a bad mood when he found HArry and Ginny K-I-S-S-I-N-G. don't forget that they are just kids and caught in the throes of not just love, but first love and all its wonders. Hermione was buried in her book and Ron was just daydreaming and as Harry said, they had been talking together a short time before. Still they do have to learn restraint.

    I think it good that they are so comfortable together now, they don't mind kissing, especially around Ron. LOL.

    Anyway I think they will be more circumspect after sev jumping bad-temperedly down their throats. Also, they do not have much opportunity to be totally alone. Ron sees to that.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 38: Fatherhood is Overrated. 19 Apr 2009 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I was wondering why you hadn't posted this last chapter here. It's brilliant! I love how embarassed Harry was when Severus talks about sex. Too cute. And I loved how he his mood completely changed when he realised that Sev likes Ginny.

    Author's Response:

    Did you read it again, Dawn? That's dedication for you. LOL

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 37: The Bequest 04 Feb 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    So sorry to hear this, Lesley. My condolences on your loss.

    The chapter was very good, as always.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your condolences. I was surprised that this review was for chapter 37 when the alert was for 38. Are you words about the chapter for 37 or 38. Whichever it is...thank you.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 37: The Bequest 31 Jan 2009 7:15 am
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story, keep up the good work and sorry to hear about your loss.

    Author's Response:

    I am sorry I did not reply to this review. I only just found it and several others from around this time. I don't think my head was on straight. Thank you for your review and your condolences.

    Lesley~

Title: Chapter 37: The Bequest 29 Jan 2009 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Renee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Leslie,
    I am sorry to hear about the loss of your sister. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family.
    Thank you for taking the time to write your story. I enjoy reading it very much.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind words, and your parayers.

    And you are very welcome. I love writing the story and sharing it with all of the people who wish to read it.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 36: Absence Makes the Heart Grow Stronger. 23 Jan 2009 2:25 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying just how alike these two are, even if they would never want to see it or admit it. Nicely done interaction with Snape and Pig too by the way.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. I enjoyed writing Sev and Pig.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 37: The Bequest 23 Jan 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: Lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My condolences on the loss of your sister. So Sorry...........

    Remarkable chapter (more so considering your grief). I find the interaction between the various characters is like a dance....to and fro....give and take....wonderful seeing how the various realationships are evolving. I look forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your kind words. They are much appreciated. Also your thoughts on the chapter. So glad you are enjoying all the characters.

    Lesley

Title: Chapter 3: A Shocking Discovery 23 Jan 2009 12:02 am
Reviewer: Asterix Tutnix (Signed) [Report This]
    "I wouldn't waste my time or compromise my immortal soul any more than it already is by killing you, you insolent little whelp, when all I have to do is wait for your love of heroics to do the job for me. But I wonder, just how many of your foolishly, faithful friends you will manage to get killed before that happy day arrives." - That's really cruel beyond words. Yes, I understand, Harry must have really offended him, after Snape is probably completely exhausted due to 3 days of intensive care, but still, inexcusably cruel, I think!
    "Our brilliant potions master is not just a pretty face, my love," he said in all seriousness and Minerva chuckled as he had known she would. - Pretty face indeed! I loved that!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, yes, our Severus is very cruel. Harry really caught him on the raw here, and Sev responded in the way he does best. Cruel is his speciality.

    Glad you liked the interaction with Minerva and Albus.

    Hope you're still enjoying it.

    Lesley


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