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Title: Chapter 20 29 Mar 2007 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Jazz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This fic seems like it really has a lot of potential and I'm sure that you are a great writer. However, I find that this fic lacks emotion. Its like the characters, especially Harry, are nothing more then puppets. They can be made to do what they their master pleases but are unable to show emotions. For me emotions are key when I am reading something and as this fic has not a drop I must leave stop reading here; I just cant force myself to go on.

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