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Title: Chapter 40 29 Mar 2007 8:29 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    The ending of this really needs some expansion. There seem to be several threads hanging. Did Draco give Harry the potion? Your characterization of Draco is uneven. We don't know what happened to Lucius. What was the reason for the death of Trelawney and the appearance of the new teacher? And we have no feeling of the purpose for Harry's vampirism. Even his relationship with Severus is a little sketchy.
Title: Chapter 40 29 Mar 2007 2:13 am
Reviewer: phoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this story, especially the harry and snape interaction.

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