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Reviews For Changes
THis is an incomplete sentence. I think you want to say "Molly Weasley must have made sure..." If all the chapters are this short, the 40 chapters will fly by. I noticed the fatherly touch of Snape telling Harry to comb his hair. I'll also be interested to see how you use Harry's ability to dream the past.
Author's Response: Here is chapter three. Sorry it took so long, I have had problems with this computer and then lost the link to the page. Enjoy! |
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