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Reviews For No Difference
“Next time you open your mouth,” he enunciated, “you should think carefully about who the target of your anger really is.”-Rock on Snape! That's actually really deep. I like the burn Snape layed out. But OH NO!! Ginny saw the box full of potion notes and now she'll accuse Snape of stealing all of them when it was really the other guy!! I don't want him to get into anymore trouble! In fact, I feel really bad that everyone seems to be after him in this...even if he was a git. And Harry and Ron are still big kids. They made me happy. And Harry's way forgiving...at least with Ginny. I WISH he'd try AND succeed a bit with Snape too...but it can't be easy becasue that wouldn't be fun! ;D And yes, poke a Snape and he hisses in return. Don't you just love it? I could just hug him and squeeze him until his eyes popped out! XD ...yeah, Snape would definitely be afraid of THIS fangirl. NOOOO doubt about that. Oops. ;3 Author's Response: I really really loved writing Snape hand Ginny her head, great to give the girl her comeuppance. Harry's less forgiving with Ginny than he is afraid to lose her. He's never had Snape, and thus not afraid of losing him. It'll happen, though, a little bit. Snape would do more than hiss at you!
You've made me hate Ginny. Author's Response: Thank you, it's fixed. True, Ginny does show her most childish and confrontational side in this chapter.
Sorry for the rant, now I want to say I really do enjoy your story other than Ginny. Thanks for writing it! Author's Response: Yes, Ginny is quite spoiled. She’s meant to be. As the youngest child of a large family, and the only girl, she had a lot of emotional pampering throughout her life. Also, because she was the baby, her parents, especially her mother, were especially protective of her. Her family and Harry himself have a history of keeping important secrets from her or leaving her out, “for her own good.” Therefore, she is particularly resentful of being kept out of the loop, simply because she has been for so long. Despite all of this, she is a genuinely good person, if a self centered one. This episode and its consequences will change her. Also, remember, Harry did cheat on her, and she lived through Snape’s headmastership. She holds him much more to blame than Harry, Ron, and Hermione, who only heard about it secondhand. This episode will change her. She will grow up.
Author's Response: She already has really messed things up with Harry. She only has back up to go.
Author's Response: Thank you, I’m glad you liked it! Well, Hermione at least is chagrined and has learned her lesson. In her defense, she really was conditioned to think of secrets as dangerous both to her and to their bearer. She was worried, and isn’t mad that he kept it secret. Ginny on the other hand, who is used to being kept on the outside of secrets and is a bit sick of it, has one hell of a lot of growing up to do. If I were wanting to get Freudian, I’d say that Harry likes domineering women because of the primal loss of his mother, or because of the way he’s had to take care of himself for so long that he subconsciously doesn’t mind someone else having control for a little while, or perhaps he just likes Ginny because of his Oedipus complex, but he does seem to like the ones that like to order him about.
And this typo just cracked me up: "so abdominally serious" That tummy sure is serious. Author's Response: Snape can't give any advice unless it's wrapped in nastiness. That's his way. Both girls take the advice in their own way, I now want to make an icon that says "Abdominally Sirius". Damn automatic spell check. Well, I went back and fixed it, anyway.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ginny’s had her little blow up. She’s just sulking now. As far as the detentions go, Snape is exercising his imagination quite happily in thinking up terrible detentions for Ginny. Hermione’s just learning how much she likes having house elves around under Filch.
Ron: I don’t have an ulterior motive, I swear… Harry: *Snort* |
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