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Reviews For No Difference
I should've mentioned in the baby chapter that I liked how Harry wonders what Sev was like as a child. -K Author's Response: This is one of the first times in this fic, all the way here at the end that I show Harry and Snape's dreadful little father son relationship as a father son relationship. Go Harry! Be a dad! He is fairly good at it, isn't he? There's a huge part of Harr that really deeply regrets leaving and not taking care of Snape. He feels responsible for te bitter twisted person Snape has become, even though he had no real choice. I feel really awful for both of them.
“I bet she was significantly better than you,” Snape muttered- hahaha!! I can TOTALLY see Snape acting like a little kid! I can imagine like a six year old Snape thinking he's hot stuff with this come back for some reason! XD He's so cute! (he'll come to my house one day and murder me because I keep insisting that he's "cute") And I'm glad Harry played gobstones with Snape. At first it was a bit weird that he would randomly get this idea, a bit awkward, but I thrive in awkwardness. (I usually don't feel so awkward about things) And I was very SLYTHERIN of Harry to trick Snape into playing. But even though Snape was being more than a jerk to Harry last time, I'm glad that Harry was able to decipher Snape's meaning, without Snape really meaning anything too deep behind his cruel words. I'm glad Harry understands that Severus feels guilty and ashamed of himself. In an odd way, it's helping bridge the gap oddly enough. “I’d kiss it better, but I think you’d hex me.”-LMAO!! HAHAHA!! That's BRILLIANT!! Oh, I could just see Snape's face, he's so mad that his face is a blank!! And then Harry waves goodbye! ROTF!! Brilliant I say!! This is one of my favorite chapters in this story. It was wonderful!! Only two more chapters to go though. :( Author's Response: Aw man, next time I see you, it'll be as potion ingredients. I really wanted to have this chapter be one more cracky concept played straight and made into something I could really see happening. Given how good Harry is with quidditch, games of coordination probably give him a certain amount of confidence, also put Snape off his equilibrium. It's a strategic choice. Harry's slowly learning to speak Snape. He's not fluent yet, but he's getting there. Poor Snape *cuddles him* he won't be a step ahead anymore, soon. Harry realizing Snape's unintended conveyance of information was a real breakthrough for him, and made him feel bad for his kid. Some of Snape's snark comes from his dear dad. Snape getting reminded of their odd family relationship=furious Snape.
Author's Response: For the first time, Harry managed to strike Snape speechless instead of the other way around. It was worried that I struck too bitter a tone with that ending, and I’m glad you liked it.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. The point is that I'm taking a ridiculous idea and playing it straight. Unfortunately, I’m almost finished, and the next chapter is the last aside from an epilogue. |
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