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Title: Detentions and Deliberations 06 Jan 2010 8:19 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    “It matters that I’m James Potter’s son, but it doesn’t matter that you’re mine.”-BURN!! But It's a nice wake up call for him I think. Poor Snape, still doesn't want to be Harry's son...not that I would if I were him, but still...

    The realization so shocked him that he almost called the boy back to rail at him.- HAHA! Snape's never really going to change, is he? He's just too snarky. THAT'S from Eileen's side, and I'm sure Harry knows it. That should also prompt him to want to let Severus keep it since it's from his mother.

    I'm still a little less than pleased with Ginny though. She makes such a mess out of everything. But maybe I'm just being too protective over Snape. He IS my favorite character after all. (poor him ;D ) But I'm sad he has to think of Lily when he sees both Harry and Ginny together in the end...and then realize that she had been his grandmother. D: SO NOT COOL! I'd probably feel worse than crap had I found out my boyfriend was my grandpa or something. >_< GROSS!! Poor guy...

    But now I'm sad. One more chapter to go, and I still want MORE!! Well, off I go to the last!

    Author's Response:

    Ouch, yeah, Harry got him there, and for once, it shut him up and made him think about his assumptions.  Poor Snape.

    Mind, Harry's snarkier than most people think, so Snape got some of it from him.  Not that either would admit to this.

    Snape's all of a sudden very glad Lily never responded to his romantic intentions.  What if he had kissed her?  Or worse?  He's pretty squicked.

    I wanted to show Ginny's good side a little more in this chapter.  She's a problem for Harry and Snape, but she's not horrible.

Title: Detentions and Deliberations 05 Mar 2009 6:58 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    OK, I like her a lot better now. The second-to-last sentence in this chapter makes no sense to me... :-(

    Author's Response:

    Harry is quieter and more reserved than his father, and not more than usually fond of jokes and pranks.  He has a serious caring disposition, whereas Ginny likes pranks, noise, and causing a bit of chaos.  Therefore, she's more like James Potter than Lily Evans and Harry is more like Lily than she.  I also forgot an apostrophe and an "s".

    Wow, I'm really surprised, most people don't come around to her.  It makes me happy!

Title: Detentions and Deliberations 28 Sep 2008 12:28 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    "“You really are a hypocrite sometimes, aren’t you?” he said without bitterness, even a little amusement. “It matters that I’m James Potter’s son, but it doesn’t matter that you’re mine.”" Oh, nice one, Harry! And I really loved that Harry helped Draco down without a lot of fuss. It seems to be helping Harry to have Slytherin son. ;-) And did we know that Draco was reading Muggle literature?

    Author's Response:

    Snape deserved that one, even if Harry’s mellowing, and Draco certainly didn’t make Harry’s good deed go easy on him.

    Yes we did, it’s all Professor Stalk’s fault (chapter 24).

Title: Detentions and Deliberations 25 Sep 2008 7:07 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Snape. I love how slowly you are working them into a relationship. Snape and Harry that is. And thank you for Ginny being done with those blasted detentions! I loved the line, "He almost called him back to rail at him." So beautifully Snape. Very well done, as always. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm really enjoying their slow progress, as I said. Wonderful.

    Author's Response:

    Sadly, there will be no next chapter.  There is only the epilogue, which takes place a few months the younger James Potter is born.  I always intended to leave their relationship closer but not too close, and I think I like leaving the ambiguity.  I'm glad you likw it.


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