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Title: Feeding the Beast 21 Jun 2008 10:15 am
Reviewer: snapeisgood (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm doing a happy dance as I type that you updated. Wonderful story! Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it.  Here's hoping I make you do more happy dances soon.
Title: Feeding the Beast 21 Jun 2008 4:24 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I love seeing the progress in this chapter. We can see Severus starting to come to terms with the total disruption of his whole self-concept--and his concept of Harry. It was really good to see him make a little progress. And I am enjoying watching Harry notice the ways he and Severus are similar. And Ginny still worries me greatly. At this point, it will take a lot for me to warm back up to her. I suppose this could be a major case of Weasley-temper, but it comes across as something more problematical.

    Author's Response:

    More like a case of boneheaded stubbornness than Weasley temper, that and fear manifesting itself as boldness.  Remember, Snape has her in detention every night, and he’s been making her pay for the news articles even though she didn’t leak them to the press, just to the students of Hogwarts (though one did lead to the other).  She’s also feeling very guilty, but doesn’t want to admit she’s wrong.

    I’m glad I finally got Harry and Snape to the point at which they can have a snippy little fight that doesn’t turn into a huge row.  Granted, it was right after a huge row, but it’s progress.

    I enjoy writing those little moments of “Oh my God, my genes actually manifest in him!” and at some point I need to have Snape do a “he really is related to me!”  Poor Snape, his self image is finally changing.

Title: Ink Bottles 06 Jun 2008 1:32 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ginny's a bitch. I usually don't mind her but I absolutely hate her (personality-wise) in this story. She had no justification for screwing over Harry and Snape, and she seems very spoiled. If I was Harry I would be angry too. People have the freaking right to keep a secret if they want to; they're not obligated to tell.

    Sorry for the rant, now I want to say I really do enjoy your story other than Ginny. Thanks for writing it!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Ginny is quite spoiled.  She’s meant to be.  As the youngest child of a large family, and the only girl, she had a lot of emotional pampering throughout her life.  Also, because she was the baby, her parents, especially her mother, were especially protective of her.  Her family and Harry himself have a history of keeping important secrets from her or leaving her out, “for her own good.”  Therefore, she is particularly resentful of being kept out of the loop, simply because she has been for so long.

    Despite all of this, she is a genuinely good person, if a self centered one.  This episode and its consequences will change her.  Also, remember, Harry did cheat on her, and she lived through Snape’s headmastership.  She holds him much more to blame than Harry, Ron, and Hermione, who only heard about it secondhand.

    This episode will change her.  She will grow up.

Title: Fiction and Non-Fiction 04 Jun 2008 7:29 am
Reviewer: Keats (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Read the entire story for the first time. I'm sorry Ginny is a total git, I don't like her I was very disappointed Harry attempted to talk to her again. I’m sorry she had no right to spy on him; she had no right to shout out what she knew to everyone. Snape suffered for years as a spy for the light and after everything he deserved a new start a new life a chance to live a normal life... because of her he can't have this. Ginny claims she loves Harry but even if you are angry with someone you love you don't do things like this to them Eileen would never have ... Her actions have damaged Harry's reputation and destroyed Snape’s new life. If Malfoy should be expelled for talking to the press then Ginny should be expelled for everything she has done...her pranks were distasteful and she has shown she has absolutely no class what so ever – I hope Harry turns away from her, please Harry deserves so much more

    Author's Response:

    This story cleaves pretty close to canon, including the epilogue, (the only difference is that I suppose Albus Severus would have a different middle name) so, I hate to disappoint you, Harry will get back together with Ginny.  Yes what she did was inexcusable, especially the spying itself.  She will come to her own mental and emotional reconciliation with this fact and grow up for it.  She still really is a child, and all the more so because everyone around her, including Harry, kept her deliberately childlike.

    Her outburst in the common room was neither malicious nor planned.  I come from a family in which nearly everyone yells when we’re mad, and we yell exactly what we’re mad about for the whole world.  Because of this, no one in the family is ever angry for long, but dozens of hurtful secrets have been thus revealed.   Ginny is this way.  When she’s angry, things she doesn’t intend to say come out.

    And I believe I did mention that Snape at least thought she deserved to be expelled several times over, but he couldn’t prove any of it, because no one who could would speak against her.

    I rally have shown Ginny’s worst side in this fic, and Harry would deserve far better if that were her only side, but she does have others.  More importantly, she will grow up.

Title: Fiction and Non-Fiction 02 Jun 2008 7:34 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting chapter. I believe Professor Stalk was rightly sorted and I can't wait to see how his plan works out. Draco was quite pitiful in this chapter, but I like the fact that you seem to be moving towards him actually dealing with the prejudices that landed his family in the situation they are.

    Author's Response: There are many sorts of ambition and cunning, aren't there?  I like writing Stalk out-Slytherin Draco, but this story isn't really about Draco, so I don't think I'll be writing much more of him in it, though I might have Snape make a snide remark about his new choice of reading material. 
Title: Fiction and Non-Fiction 02 Jun 2008 6:26 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh, can't wait to see what goes on with Draco next. And I am excited to see Teddy and Andromeda here. I am glad he made it up with Ron. Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.  Actually, I wasn't planning to write any more of Draco, and actually, I only have a few chapters to go.  draco isn't my favorite character to write.  I'm afraid you'll have to wait for the chapter after next for Teddy and Andromeda.

    You know, as much  as I like conflict(it's a requirement, it is) I don't like conflict within the trio.  I'm glad they made up too.  Poor Ron and Hermione. they were trying so hard.

Title: Fiction and Non-Fiction 02 Jun 2008 5:28 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Malfoy is very interesting as a character. The last line especially was well written. Professor Stalk appears in a much clearer (?) light than when first we met him which is good. I like the idea of teddy coming into the story - make sure you do him well. But I think that Snape and Ginny are getting a bit tiresome - can't Snape get more interaction than just slamming the door in Harry's face the whole time? It's nice that Ron and Harry are back on speaking terms - you've written the trio well.

    Author's Response:

    Oh don't worry, it won't end up as Bad!kidfic.  I have year old nephews, so I know how they act, but it will mostly be Harry, Andromeda, and Harry's conscience.

    Snape and Harry will be back soon, and after the trip to Andromeda's, it will be almost entirely Harry and Snape again.  I'm gatting close to the end of the fic.

Title: Fiction and Non-Fiction 02 Jun 2008 4:38 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I continue to feel sorry for Harry and the way the wizarding world treats them. Between the Malfoy's getting off scot-free and the way they are treating Harry over his "son", it makes you wonder why he wants to stay in Great Britain at all.

    Author's Response: Harry's just the sort of person to whom it wouldn't occur to him to move.  The life he wants and the people he wants are in Britain, so that's where he will stay.  Draco doesn't get away with it.  This sort of detention will be very hard on him indeed.
Title: Ink Bottles 17 May 2008 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ginny really is going to mess things up with Harry, isn't she?

    Author's Response: She already has really messed things up with Harry.  She only has back up to go.
Title: Ink Bottles 15 May 2008 10:47 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. I liked the detentions. Poor Harry - always apologizing for his friends mistakes...such a wuss. But then he does seems to be attracted to controlling women, doesn't he? How DARE he keep an intensely private secret that involves someone else, from the domineering, ego-centric, immature girls in his life! They're his FRIENDS after all - that means they OWN him, doesn't it? Honestly! It's not like Hermione or Ginny should be concerned about Harry's feelings - or what he went through trapped in another time. How their betrayal damages his and Snape's lives from now on is irrelevant compared to Harry's sin of keeping secrets from them - right?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I’m glad you liked it!

    Well, Hermione at least is chagrined and has learned her lesson.  In her defense, she really was conditioned to think of secrets as dangerous both to her and to their bearer.  She was worried, and isn’t mad that he kept it secret.  Ginny on the other hand, who is used to being kept on the outside of secrets and is a bit sick of it, has one hell of a lot of growing up to do.

    If I were wanting to get Freudian, I’d say that Harry likes domineering women because of the primal loss of his mother, or because of the way he’s had to take care of himself for so long that he subconsciously doesn’t mind someone else having control for a little while, or perhaps he just likes Ginny because of his Oedipus complex, but he does seem to like the ones that like to order him about.


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