| Title: Chapter 1
| 28 Jan 2008 1:16 am
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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to early to make a comment on the story will need to read more. If English is not your first language you have me fooled. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback. It's my first story and it's actually funny to write in English as I hardly have a chance to practice;-) I know the first chap was really short. The next will be longer. It will take a while till it is finished. I’m not quite satisfied yet with it and I'll have to change a few things to make it better readable. But it will come.
nice start...would like to have seen more.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 25 Jan 2008 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Not a bad start. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll try but will have to change a few things till I'm satisfied with it to post.
i'm not sure what to make of this -- the chapter is really short. keep writing, though -- i like the summary, and i hope i'll love the fic! ^^;;
That was a good first chapter, you've got me wondering what will happpen in the next chapter so don't keep us waiting to long.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jan 2008 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Wolverine (Anonymous)
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Great story. I loved it please update soon.
Not a bad start so far. I'm curious to see where this will go and I hope you can update again soon!
Pretty good start. I like your story so far. Please keep going!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jan 2008 4:50 am
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| Reviewer: Nekosune (Anonymous)
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I've enjoyed it so far, but I'm in suspense for some heavy drama! ^_^
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