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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! >>>Draco is finally realizing exactly what he has done. Yes, he's realized it in stages, but he truly is remorseful now. And yes, Draco will be at the ball...I have big plans for him!
Author's Response: Thank you!
>>>Never too early to start Christmas! My feelings exactly!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it.
Well, let's see... I remember mentioning that I really think Harry ought to go to the Yule Ball as himself. I know I loved the scene between Draco and Harry at the end, and the Christmas decorating. Oh, and I'm pretty sure I threw in an "excellent chapter!" and "well done!" or two. ^^ Awesome chapter. Do update soon - oh, and multi-posting doesn't work out too well! ^^ Bravo. Author's Response: Thanks again, DP! I really appreciate your reviewing again for me when the first ones were lost.
Author's Response: Thank you! And you double-reviewed for me too, didn't you, LL? Thank you; I really appreciate it! It was a lot of fun to show Harry experiencing a bit of the jealousy that Draco felt; I'm glad you noticed it. And yeah, they've come a long way, haven't they?
Great chapter my dear, as per usual. I especially loved the decorating scene, where Harry, being his sweet self, invited Draco to participate. What a selfless and forgiving person he is. Oh, and the way that you described the decorations was simply superb. You are such a gifted writer Kristeh. I really felt like I was there. I simply cannot wait till the next chapter, and the Yule Ball. Oh, and wonderful ending too. I'm glad that Draco and Harry have decided to start over. Things are finally starting to fall into place for Harry; now, if only the Slavery Spell could be reversed, everything would be perfect for Harry, and he would have all the love and caring that he deserves from a wonderful dad. Oh, and I do wish that Harry could go as himself to the Yule Ball, and Draco is right--Harry has nothing to be ashamed of. I hope that Harry will finally realise though, that he has many supporters at Hogwarts, who are very loyal towards him. I wonder how everyone will treat Draco now if Harry has made the step towards forgiveness. Ooh, squee, I want Christmas to come! Wonderful, brilliant, superb, fantastic, heart-warming, and so well-written; what more can I say about this story!!! Author's Response: Thankfully Jan straightened out the deletion trouble for me. Thanks for the double review; it means a lot to me! I think the Yule Ball will be a turning point for several people. I can't wait to write it.
I'm all warm inside now. You have such a gift for writing; you can make me feel your characters emotions, so much so that I had tears of joy and of sorrow--first, for the Christmas scene and how Harry went out of his way to make Draco feel involved in the decorating, and how Harry told Draco that he forgave him, and wanted to start over. I really hope that this is a fresh beginning for both boys. I am so anxious for both Christmas and for the Ball. Oh, and Kristeh, you described the tree and the decorations so superbly, that I felt that I was there! I want that hot chocolate too! You made me feel as though I could taste it! Great chappie Kristeh, and I am so so anxious for the next! I do the happy dance every time I see that you've updated! :) Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora! I'm all ready to decorate my own house for Christmas now! But maybe we can go ahead and have that hot chocolate. I think you are a very gifted writer and I am so excited for your stories, too!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Christmas and I'm ready for it now, lol. It's always fun to write too.
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, I agree with your sentiments. I'm really happy that you're enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thank you, DP! Glad you liked it. Draco and Harry are really starting to be fun for me to write so I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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