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Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I loved it Kristeh!

    I especially loved the teasing between Harry and Ginny about her kissing him under the misletoe. LOL!

    Aw, that's so nice of Harry to include Draco, and to want so desperately for all of his friends to get along.

    I really hope that Harry eventually can feel that he doesn't need Polyjuice to return to Hogwarts. I want so much for him to be free again. If only Severus and Dumbledore can find a way to reverse the Slavery spell.

    I'm so looking forward to the next chappie Kristeh. Wonderful job as usual. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:03 am
Reviewer: hpfan4life (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Another Chapter! So exciting...and hopefully the rest of the gang will try to get along with Draco. I know the boy is trying...and that's all you can really ask of him...right?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Draco's doing all he can at the moment...he's certainly not perfect, but he's trying.
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: hpfan4life (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Another Chapter! So exciting...and hopefully the rest of the gang will try to get along with Draco. I know the boy is trying...and that's all you can really ask of him...right?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Draci still has a ways to go, but he is trying.
Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 2:14 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! It always brightens my day when I see that Slave Child is up!

    I liked this chapter a lot--You have to admit that Harry is a determined young man--at least when it comes to his friends.

    Great chapter

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

    >>>It always brightens my day when I see that Slave Child is up!

    Aw, thank you...that brightens my day!

    And yes, Harry is very determined to try to have all his friends get along.

     

     

Title: Chapter 70 14 Oct 2010 1:43 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter. :D I like how Harry shows a bit of an interest in Draco's art book. They're certainly growing closer as a family I would say. The part with Harry and Ginny was rather funny. Great job as always.

    Author's Response: Thank you, LL!  I'm enjoying adding in the little bits of art, too, so I'm glad you're enjoying it.  I hope it gives a little more dimension to the characters, and you never know...the 'interest in art' angle might come into play in a more important way at a later point, and if it doesn't...well, maybe it made the characters a little more well-rounded. 
Title: Chapter 70 13 Oct 2010 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Urrrffff.....I do hope the end won't be anti-climatic. Kudos on a well written chapter. Hope the Yule Ball goes okay for Harry and Draco.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I hope the end won't be anti-climatic too.  Some people might think it is and hopefully most will be satisfied.  But all I can do is write the story the way I've imagined it and do my best.  The Yule Ball will begin in chapter 71, but at the rate I'm going, it may fill two chapters.  But that's ok with me, I'm not in any rush.  I love SC and I'd probably be happy to keep writing it forever, lol.
Title: Chapter 70 13 Oct 2010 9:34 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter kept me on the edge of my seat, thinking that Draco would impose his own condition on Harry: If Draco agreed to hang with Harry's friends, then Harry would have to forego the Polyjuice. And it DIDN'T happen! You really had me fooled! But Draco really is trying to be a true friend to Harry, and that's what matters. Now, off to the Ball! SOMETHING is BOUND to HAPPEN!!! ;-)

    Author's Response: Thanks again, shadowienne!  Yeah, Draco is trying.  He certainly is not perfect, but he does want to become a better person and he's trying to be a good friend to Harry.  Now, what makes you think something will happen at the Ball...*evil grin*?

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