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Title: Chapter 71 23 Nov 2010 12:38 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter loved Draco he's becoming a bit of a hero in this!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Draco needed a good moment, I thought.  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 71 22 Nov 2010 9:10 am
Reviewer: angelmari87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah! Harry is going back - I think?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry, Severus, and Draco will all be back at Hogwarts after Christmas holidays.
Title: Chapter 71 22 Nov 2010 8:26 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww! I'm gonna burst from the squeeness of it all! Only you could turn such a horrible, heart-wrenching moment as when that... mean bully-dude... tipped out the polyjuice into something so heart-warming ^^

    And who wouldnt do what Draco would when that ass said that to Harry!!! I cant believe he said that!!! Very well done indeed, there's no way to feel sympathetic for those two, even when they have their little chat with Sev... which I am very much looking forward to ^^ Nothing better than protective-sev ^^

    And I loved that everyone knew it was him despite the polyjuice ^^ I mean, he wasnt acting very Weasley-ish I suppose but that Dean and Seamus were trying to be all covert about it was just too cute ^^

    I really cant wait for more, but then I've never been very patient when it comes to anything you write (eg, seeing the update in my inbox and immediately forgetting all else in order to read this... twice... or more... you cant prove anything ^^)

    Hope life is being kind and that you're looking forward to Christmas... surely everyone should be on holidays by now right?
    have fun! ^^
    x

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, sproutchild!  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I wanted to give Draco a moment to begin redeeming himself, to show that he has changed, and it was lots of fun to write...glad you liked it.  And yeah, I thought the other kids might be a little suspicious if some never-before-mentioned Weasley cousin just happened to show up at the Ball, along with Severus and Draco.  But they're good friends so they weren't going to blow Harry's cover.  

    And btw, I'd love to read a chapter of "Antonomasia", too!

       

Title: Chapter 71 20 Nov 2010 12:13 pm
Reviewer: Jana (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love it! Great chapter Kristeh! So finally Harry broke through his fear. I'm happy for him.
    I really like Draco inthis chapter.
    Thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I wanted to give Draco a chance to shine and to show that he can be a good friend, so I'm happy you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 71 20 Nov 2010 7:35 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot! Go Draco! Go Harry's friends! Kudos to the wonderful author who writes this :D!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You're so sweet.  I really enjoyed writing this chapter; I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 71 20 Nov 2010 5:47 am
Reviewer: Robert Sharp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, it just keeps getting better and better!!! It's great that there are forums such as this one, for those of us who are sad that there may not be a new harry potter book or movie. You bring justice to the Harry Potter univers, and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I hope you're enjoying the forums...lots of wonderful stories here.  I know that I've been a little sad about the last movies coming out, but as long as we fans are still here to write and discuss the characters, I hope the fandom will still have a long life!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!! Kristeh!

    Squee, squeeeeeeeee!!!! I loved it! Especially the end. Yay for Harry's friends. I just knew that they'd come through, and I'm so glad that Draco got a chance to prove that he had really changed, by defending Harry like that.

    Aw, poor Luna though. I'm sad that her necklace broke, and I hope that Draco can really get it fixed for her.

    It was too cute that the Gryffies, and the other Houses, all stood by Harry, and that Seamus and Neville all knew that Harry was not really Barney Weasley

    Oh, that was really funny too, when those bullies whined that Draco had broken their noses, and hurt them, and Dumbles, and Sev went along with Draco's story about them slipping on the Polyjuice potion. Serves him right, the bully.

    I really love this story; it just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for more.

    Great job as usual, Kristeh.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  Glad you liked it.  You know that bit with Draco defending Harry has been planned for ages, so it was fun to finally get to write it out.  Don't worry, I think Luna's necklace can be repaired.  Of course all of Harry's friends stood up for him, we all knew they would.  Yeah, I don't think anyone was feeling much sympathy for Bole and Bletchley.  I sure wouldn't want to be in their shoes!  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 5:58 pm
Reviewer: snapefan_17 (Signed) [Report This]
    great so far really well written with an excellent plot. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 3:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh im so glad they are going back to Hogwarts!! ive missed the general daily grinds of them being students hehe :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've missed having them at Hogwarts, and yet I'm a little nervous about them returning, lol...I'm more comfortable writing them at Prince Hall.  But Hogwarts is  just an integral part of Harry's story and it's good to push yourself out of your comfort zone sometimes. 
Title: Chapter 71 19 Nov 2010 1:34 pm
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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