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Title: Chapter 73 06 Feb 2011 6:43 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Of course the Ministry will try and make trouble but I am thinking that since you didn't mention a storm at all in the chapter but ended up with a "violent gust of wind shrieked in fury" that something painful will happen do to Harry and Severus verbally agreeing to make Harry his son.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  We'll see what happens in the next few chapters!
Title: Chapter 73 06 Feb 2011 5:59 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    :) aww
    Good Chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 73 06 Feb 2011 4:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Kristeh, that "was" so warm and fuzzy, and definitely full of "squee-factor"!

    I loved the presents and the scene with the Weasleys was just so realistic; I could just imagine them all sitting around and the warm family atmosphere.

    I thought that that was really nice of Severus to give Ron and Ginny schoolbags.

    Oh, and I'm glad that Sev included Norie and Zan in the festivities; afterall, they are part of the family.

    I'm so pleased that Severus and |Harry are finally going to be Father and Son in the eyes of the law.

    That little bit about the gust of the wind, was so ominous and I'm so nervous about what is to happen.

    Great chappie as usual Kristeh. I can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: See below.
Title: Chapter 73 06 Feb 2011 4:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Kristeh, that "was" so warm and fuzzy, and definitely full of "squee-factor"!

    I loved the presents and the scene with the Weasleys was just so realistic; I could just imagine them all sitting around and the warm family atmosphere.

    I thought that that was really nice of Severus to give Ron and Ginny schoolbags.

    Oh, and I'm glad that Sev included Norie and Zan in the festivities; afterall, they are part of the family.

    I'm so pleased that Severus and |Harry are finally going to be Father and Son in the eyes of the law.

    That little bit about the gust of the wind, was so ominous and I'm so nervous about what is to happen.

    Great chappie as usual Kristeh. I can't wait for the next one.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter and I love knowing what your favorite parts were, too.  Yeah, the wind is ominous, isn't it?  Can't wait for more from you too!

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