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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you didn't give up on me.
If this was covered earlier, I forgot, as it has been a while since the fic started. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I've had a lot of questions about the slavery spell and why it's so dormant. Actually, although the spell has been curiously dormant, it doesn't compel Harry to obey or punish him for disobeying. The spell would punish Harry for attempting to escape, attempting to (physically) harm Severus, and for not turning property over to Severus. It also says that Severus has the right to punish Harry as he sees fit. But the spell itself does not punish Harry for disobeying his master; it leaves that up to Severus. The resolution to the slavery spell should be coming up soon, probably within the next 2 chapters.
I'm glad that Mr. Granger survived the attack, but it is so sad that he'll have those werewolfish tendencies now. I hope that Lupin can guide him and make it easier for the family to bear. Aw, poor Harry. He never properly grieved over Sirius, did he? I love that last scene between Snape and Harry. It was very sweet, and shows how far they have both come. Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora! I think Remus can help, and the wolfish tendencies shouldn't be too severe. Didn't it mention that Bill's only real change was that he liked his meat raw after Greyback's attack? The Harry and Sev scene was fun to write...though it was a sad one, I suppose.
V. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Harry never has really dealt with his grief and guilt over Sirius' death.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think it was worth waiting for! |
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