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Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 11:38 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice one, Kristeh. Well worth the wait, and a good excuse to reread the previous couple of chapters.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you didn't give up on me.
Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 11:38 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wouldn't as a slave, no matter how unwillingly, when Severus gives an order Harry would be obliged to carry it out? Wouldn't the magic that binds him as a slave enforce Severus' orders and if Harry somehow could disobey, wouldn't that magic somehow punish Harry for being a disobedient slave?

    If this was covered earlier, I forgot, as it has been a while since the fic started.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I've had a lot of questions about the slavery spell and why it's so dormant.  Actually, although the spell has been curiously dormant, it doesn't compel Harry to obey or punish him for disobeying.  The spell would punish Harry for attempting to escape, attempting to (physically) harm Severus, and for not turning property over to Severus.  It also says that Severus has the right to punish Harry as he sees fit.  But the spell itself does not punish Harry for disobeying his master; it leaves that up to Severus.  The resolution to the slavery spell should be coming up soon, probably within the next 2 chapters.
Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God. Poor Mr. and Mrs. Granger, and poor Hermione

    I'm glad that Mr. Granger survived the attack, but it is so sad that he'll have those werewolfish tendencies now. I hope that Lupin can guide him and make it easier for the family to bear.

    Aw, poor Harry. He never properly grieved over Sirius, did he? I love that last scene between Snape and Harry. It was very sweet, and shows how far they have both come.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora!  I think Remus can help, and the wolfish tendencies shouldn't be too severe.  Didn't it mention that Bill's only real change was that he liked his meat raw after Greyback's attack?  The Harry and Sev scene was fun to write...though it was a sad one, I suppose.
Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! Thanks for the update--it was worth the wait!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you think so!
Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 11:00 am
Reviewer: Jana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, thank you very much. Beautiful chapter! I'm so happy that Hermione's parents are ok. And talk about Harry's blame of Sirius death was so sweet.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry never has really dealt with his grief and guilt over Sirius' death.
Title: Chapter 75 23 May 2011 8:21 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww....such a sweet chapter!! Loved it! It was worth the wait!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you think it was worth waiting for!

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