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Title: Chapter 76 30 Jun 2011 5:42 am
Reviewer: GraveDigger_Resurrection (Signed) [Report This]
    WHAT?!?!?!?!?

    I CAN'T LEAVE YOU THE AWESOME REVIEW ABOUT HOW EPIC THIS FIC CONTINUES TO BE, BECAUSE I'M TOO BUSY GIBBERING INCOHERENTLY AND FLAILING AT MY SCREEN. EPIC UPDATE IS EPIC.

    /capslock

    seriously, I'm on the edge of my seat. Love this fic. Cannot WAIT for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 76 30 Jun 2011 4:44 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    dun dun dun........what a cliffy.

    Author's Response: Yeah, I guess it is.  Thanks for reviewing! 
Title: Chapter 76 30 Jun 2011 12:00 am
Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Kristeh - this is such an amazing story - all of your writing is beautiful, and the relationship between Severus and Harry is so wonderful in your writing. Thank you so much for sharing with us and continuing to update.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  What a lovely compliment!  I'm really happy that you're still enjoying SC.  Thank you for being so encouraging.  I really appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 7:09 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Very evil of you to leave things hanging there... especially after making us wait so long for this wonderful chapter! *grin* Here's hoping you post again soon.

    Author's Response: Sorry about that, lol.  But I had to wait until the time was right.  I'll try to post again soon.  Thank you!  
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 6:12 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooooooooooh............

    ........?

    Build that tension ^^ I Reeeeeeally hope you update sooner rather than later because that ending has my brain working overtime ^^

    Very glad that they are talking about Sirius, I think that's one of those things that's been an undercurrent in Harry's life since it happened and in this fic its been a huge motivator for some of his decisions so it makes sense that it would take a great deal of work to sort out in his head. It's a shame Remus seems uninterested in being in Harry's life (*thinks back to a few chapters ago when he looked as if he wanted to say something and didnt... hmmm...*)

    "So Hedwig's bringing you gifts now too?" --- I cracked the goofiest smile when I read that... Awww, I keep forgetting but it's so gorgeous the extent to which your Sev will make Harry feel happier and love life more... imagine if that spell was really gone, their lives would be officially perfect! Does that mean we are coming to the end of this little (haha!) fic? (nooooo!)

    Hope life is sweet and that you're smiling lots (and that you're ready for that last HP movie, I personally have my hands perpetually over my eyes so I'm ready for all of those "No, no, this isnt really happening!" moments... makes it hard to type and... walk... but these things must be done. Sigh. You are awesomeness.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked the chapter.  Yes, absolutely Sirius has always been in the back of Harry's mind, and his grief and guilt have affected him.  It is something that he needed to share and let out, though healing will take time.  And Severus loves Harry whole-heartedly.  Helping Harry to feel better is Severus' top priority. 

    >>>Does that mean we are coming to the end of this little (haha!) fic?

    Well, no, I don't think so.  I have other ideas...some more troubles with Greyback and Dolohov, and perhaps Lucius Malfoy, too.  I have ideas that involve Remus and a new character too.  Some of these may not make it into the fic, as I'm playing around them.  I had originally intended to end the story at Christmas, with the resolution of the slavery spell, and then write a sequel.  But I'm not sure if I had enough ideas to make a comparable-length sequel (and I didn't want to write just a short one), so I decided to make the original story longer and try to incorporate the new ideas.  We'll see how it works out.

    Oh, yes, I'm very ready for DH 2.  It will be hard to see all the deaths, but that's what fanfic is for, right? 

    Thanks again! 

     

Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 1:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Is Harry free? Was it a botched spell? I thught you said he would never be free? Wow can't wait for the next but thank you for this one!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Hopefully the next chapter will answer your questions.
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 10:15 am
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, great! I'm intrigued^^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 6:58 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. You just can't resist a "cliffee" can you? LOL No slavery spell showing......interesting, love cures all things! It was nice that and sad when Harry realized that the adoption could have happened anytime in those past months with only Dumbledor with them to do the bonding......as humans we learn by our mistakes!!!! Thank you for a great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Ali.  Of course I can't resist a cliffhanger; it keeps things interesting, doesn't it?  Yeah, Dumbledore could have done the ceremony all along, but I had to have a reason to prolong the situation so I had to have them just not think about that.  Rather a weak point, but it was the best I could come up with.
Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 5:44 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! Is the spell gone? Great chapter....

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>Is the spell gone?

    Tune in next time, lol. 

     

     

Title: Chapter 76 29 Jun 2011 5:41 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Squeeeee!!!!! Yay! Harry is finally going to be what he was all along...Severus' son.

    I'm glad that Draco is getting along with Hermione and Draco and that they plan on continuing to do so after they start back at Hogwarts.

    Ooh, very curious. You left us with a cliffie my dear! I can't wait to see the implications of this adoption ceremony.

    Great job as usual Kristeh. I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  It'll be interesting to see Draco being friends with Harry and Co. at school, won't it?  And the adoption ceremony...you knew something was going to happen there!   

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