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Reviews For Slave Child
Angst!!!! Muahahahahahahahah! I love angst, and what better then torturing Harry in front of Severus? Try not to torture Sev, I don't like that, emotional torture suits Sev better. Please? This is awesome, have any idea when will you update? Will you take my idea? I would love it if you do, but your wish. I just want you to update.
I hope that you will continue this story, please. It's long time since it's stop. Sorry for my english but I am italian ;) Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words and it's great to see someone reading and enjoying the story!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, they did live happily ever after; that's how all stories should end!
Author's Response: Thank you! Right now my muse has abandoned me, I'm afraid. I pushed myself to get the slavery issue resolved so that at least that part wouldn't be left hanging. I do think I might come back to writing it sometime; I still have ideas for this story, but just finding the time and motivation to write is difficult for now.
I have but one tiny problem with this chapter, at the moment. There is no Next button, Kristeh. I need a Next button. It is most necessary. *nods for emphasis* Author's Response: Thank you, DP! I'm really glad you're still reading and enjoying SC. I am thinking about continuing on with, the trouble is that I'm just not feeling creative. How about telling my muse to come back and visit me this Christmas?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afraid I don't have much writing time now, but maybe one day.
Lle mellon, Laer(summer) P.S. I am currently learning Sindarin.
I do find Remus being so distant with Harry odd. I hope that's explained soon. Does he know something about Harry that Harry doesn't? Or is it that Remus blames Harry for his friends dying around him? Or is Remus feeling guilty himself? I also thought that Voldemort's defeat was rather abrupt. The chapter where it happened was great, but I just can't imagine Voldemort being defeated by a simple "expelliarmus." I really like the way Draco is portrayed in your story. He's a teenager just like Harry who is trying to deal with everything in his life. With Snape and HArry's help I have the feeling that he'll turn out ok. Also...Do I sense a bit of a Draco/Luna connection in the Yule Ball chapter? Author's Response: Thank you so much for the long and thoughtful review! I'm so sorry that it's taken me a while to respond. All I can do is plead a very busy holiday season. As for Remus being distant with Harry, I have to say that I always thought canon Remus had difficulties letting himself grow close to others. In the end, I believe he worked it out with Tonks and baby Teddy, but before that he did seem to have issues. He was fine being supportive and friendly in a more casual way, but whenever it seemed that a true closeness could develop he would pull back and distance himself. He pretty much disappeared from Harry's life after POA, not even sending him a letter offering encouragement or advice during the Triwizard Tournament. He never played a very big role in Harry's life after that either, certainly not as much as one might expect considering that James was one of his closest friends and had offered Remus so much support during his life. I think Remus has his reasons and I do hope to explore that later in the story. It also wasn't technically the expelliarmus that defeated Voldemort. It was his own curse that rebounded. He cast an AK spell at Harry, and Lily's magical protection flared up and caused that curse to reflect back on Voldemort. But yes, I have always felt that that part of the story was not as dramatic as it could have been. Action scenes are just not my forte. I'm so glad you like Draco. As for Draco/Luna, possibly, but romance is very much on the backseat in my stories. I prefer to write gen fic. Thanks again!
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