good start. on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 11 Apr 2011 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: Bullet Soul (Anonymous)
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Help! I have read your story and I love it, but I am in desperate need of assistance. I tried to register an account on this site then log on, but I need a password. How am I supposed to know what it is? It didn't even show me a place to come up with one! It frustrates me so much! I can't get on, there for I cannot write stories! Who ever has been able to get an account, tell me where the pass word is!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think you create your own password. If you're still having trouble try to contact ObsidianEmbrace or Pandora. They should be able to help you.
Great start! It's only normal that Sirius' death affected Harry and I felt so sorry for him. I hope that Severus lurking means he was watching out for Harry. What did that prat of a Slytherin do now? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter or so. I was only suppose to read 1 chapter on my lunch break, but I can't stop now. This is a great read, thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought that Harry would have been more affected by Sirius' death than he seemed in canon. Hope you don't get in trouble in work, lol!
I haven't started reading this story yet but it is the next one im starting! I have passed by it several times and then I looked at the 10 most reviewed stories on this site, this was at the top. So I looked at some of the reviews (to see if they were good or bad) all of the ones I read were really good praise, and the thing that stuck out to me is that all of them were answered! I know im going to enjoy this fic and maybe it will help me get out of my bored mood! (On bed rest with the flew!!!)
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy it. And feel better soon, too!
So I am finally reading this story! Just now getting around to it! Whoo-hoo!
So far, I do like it! Yay!
Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm happy you like it!
Ooo! I admit it, you've got me! I'm uber curious! Very nice chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ivy!
Wow, you are an awesome writer, and I bow, humbled by your creativity.
-JW.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've enjoyed your stories as well!
Leave the reader in suspense why don't ya!! Lol, great first chapter, the readers who had to wait for the second chapter might no agree with me though. I love cliff hangers! Very good but is this a multple POV story? If not you might want to watch out. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll probably go back and forth between Harry's and Severus' POV, though I think it'll eventually be more from Harry's.
Interesting beginning so far... you've hooked me and I'm glad there's already another chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Well, you've begun a new story and ended the first chapter on quite the cliffhanger. What the heck did that smarmy Slytherin do anyway?
I felt so sorry for Harry and understood completely why he didn't want to join his friends.
It's an interesting opening and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out what Draco did in chapter 2, which I hope will be up in a day or two, and then I can work on "Potions Professor" this weekend. I'm glad you understand what Harry's going through right now, and unfortunately for him, things are about to get even worse.
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