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Title: Chapter 3 18 Jan 2011 9:06 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    GREAT WORK!! I like the background information on Severus and I love Norie and Zan, they're hilarious trying to meddle in Sev' life and get him married. I'm liking this story more and more.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It's fun to try to come up with backstories for the characters, and I have to admit to having a soft spot for Norie and Zan, too.
Title: Chapter 3 15 Dec 2010 5:21 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhhhh!!! This is a great story line! But, oh no!
Title: Chapter 3 07 Aug 2009 1:10 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! What the heck happened there?!?! Sev might have fun with this, but Harry sure won't. Oh darn it, now I'm hooked more than ever! Really good chapter. Loved the house elves! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked Norie and Zan.
Title: Chapter 3 03 Aug 2008 11:20 pm
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I was so worried you were going to say they had to share a soul or something like that, or Harry had lost his magic... interesting twist you have put on things! I'm thoroughly enjoying reading your style of writing.

    -JW.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 30 May 2008 5:11 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    AHHHHHHHH! Wow, what a line to end a chapter with! I'm in shock, kinda hopingh he would be enslaved to Draco but Severus has not been done before (as far as I know). Cool idea!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am quite bad about cliffhangers.  Harry enslaved to Draco could be interesting, but I just really wanted to develop a father/son relationship between Harry and Sev, and that would be harder if Harry were Draco's slave, I think. 
Title: Chapter 3 11 Feb 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Princess Arica of Rivendell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooo interesting; please update again soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 11 Feb 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Princess Arica of Rivendell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ooo interesting; please update again soon.
Title: Chapter 3 11 Feb 2008 2:08 am
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry. update soon.
Title: Chapter 3 10 Feb 2008 9:02 pm
Reviewer: pkrosche (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter!! But I'm really excited for some Harry/Severus interaction...or even just some Severus sitting by Harry's bed, thinking over the present precicament!! Juicy! Or even just more talk about how exactly this spell works. Hmmm...and I'm really excited for Severus' reaction to the news...

    I did love Severus' house elves too!! They're perfect at balancing out his demeanor and they do a lovely job of it!

    I'm also glad that it was Severus who visited the Dursleys and enjoyed how Severus' view of Harry is beginning to be challenged. Hopefully Harry isn't too hard on the man and they can grow to appreciate each other (sooner rather than later!)...however everyone else is saying how patiently they're waiting...so...I guess I'll wait patiently too. *sigh*

    Really looking forward to another chapter here and in PP!! Keep writing!!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Feb 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Ayana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY UPDATE!!!

    'twas a great chapter, and you shocked me too the core with the last line "Harry is enslaved to you, Severus" call me stupid but I hadn't expected that though I probably should have with "slave child" as the title xD

    *is waiting impatiently far next chapter*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, the title was kind of a giveaway, wasn't it?  Though by the end of the story, if anyone didn't know better, they'd probably think the situation was reversed, cause Severus will end up being quite devoted to Harry's well-being.  I don't suppose that's really a spoiler, since I did say that the fic would eventually be a Snape-adopts-Harry story.  Thanks again!

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