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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you, too, for reading and leaving a review! I'm so glad you liked it!
And I can imagine that this would truly seem like a nightmare to him. Nobody would want to be enslaved to anyone, least of all someone who SEEMS to be as unpleasant as Snape. I imagine the two of them have a lot to learn about each other. And I imagine that will probably take quite some time. Thanks so much for the update. Can't wait to see where you take us with this story. Take care... Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, once school starts again, Harry will have to live in Severus' quarters, but that won't be for a while. According to what I've got planned now, a lot of things will happen over the summer first. And you're right...Severus and Harry have a lot to learn about each other. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I do have some conflicts and traumatic events planned. The hard part is not rushing them. Guess I'll just have to try to be patient, lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it!
EEP! *faints* -Elise Author's Response: Thanks, Elise! You read "Potions Professor" in one day? Wow, I'm very flattered. I know what you mean about 'mean Snape'. It was hard for me to get used to writing them being antagonistic again, too. I think I'm going to let Severus warm up a little earlier, but it will be because of a very traumatic event that will happen fairly early in the story. Glad you're liking it!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Harry's thinking all kinds of horrible things right now, and who can blame him? Harry and Sev together? That's going to be interesting for a while. Poppy won't be very happy about it either, but she does understand that there isn't much of a choice. I don't think anyone else is going to find out for a while.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really happy you like the story! I'll update asap, how about that?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not exactly sure what you're wanting to know when you say you hope there's a purpose for the torment. If you mean, why am I writing it...well, the idea occurred to me and I wanted to try writing it, because there's the potential for some good angsty, hurt/comfort scenes, and I enjoy writing those. Also, even though of course slavery is a terrible thing and a sensitive issue, as I noted at the beginning of the story, I'm not really thinking of Harry's case as a typical example of slavery, where one group of people subjects another out of their own cruelty or greed or desire to dominate. Severus doesn't want to own Harry. If there were a safe way to free him, Severus would do it in a heartbeat, and he's not going to intentionally abuse him, at least not physically. Right now, Sev is still in his 'I-hate-all things-Potter' mode, so there may be some nasty verbal exchanges before Sev starts to warm up. Anyway, though, to me, Harry's case is almost more comparable to someone whose life is drastically changed by some type of accident or the onset of a chronic disease. It can be very harsh and unfair, and life is different afterwards, but it doesn't mean that the person's life is forever ruined and that they can never find any joy or peace again, either. I guess I'm hoping, without trying to sound 'preachy', that the story can be life-affirming and give a message that no matter how bad things may be, they can always get better. If you're wanting to know within the context of the story...the slavery spell will eventually lead to Severus and Harry becoming a family, and to Draco's redemption, too. Now, about the Potter and Black lines and inheritance...I don't think it necessarily means the end of that. For one thing, though I'm not going to take the story into Harry's adulthood and I want Severus to live a very, very long time and die peacefully of old age, there is the fact that once Severus dies, Harry will be free again (assuming Harry outlives Severus). At that point, he would regain ownership of all his possessions. ***Small spoiler for story ahead*** At a later point, Harry will say something about how he can never marry now, and Severus will reassure him that that isn't true. He'll tell Harry that, though for ethical reasons, of course Harry should let a potential wife know about the slavery spell, it really shouldn't have a drastic effect on how they would live. Harry may not be able to legally own things, but Severus gives him the freedom to use things however he wants, and he'll explain that among wealthy wizards who have family estates, it's very common for two or three generations to live together, so a potential wife could adjust to Severus having to live with them, hopefully. Also, Harry's children would not be slaves and they could inherit anything Severus would want to give them. Well, I've really rambled, and I'm sorry for that, but I hope I've answered your questions, at least partially. Thanks again.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jan! Yeah, Harry did take it well, so far, but a big part of that is that he's still in shock and it hasn't really sunk in yet. Also, knowing that the spell has the power to kill or to cause excruciating pain would be a big motivating factor not to push its limits, don't you think? But after a rocky start, it won't be as terrible as Harry's afraid of right now.
Poor Harry. Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Harry, indeed. The next few weeks will be pretty rough on him, poor kid. |
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