I'm going to have a meltdown for Harry.
My music is on suffle and "Invisible" by Hunter Hayes started playing about halfway through the chapter and now I'm half a step from tears.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 16 Feb 2014 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this very much.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you're enjoying it.
Poor Harry, I'm sure he wishes he could wake up from what must be his worst nightmare. Snape, in his "I hate Potter" glory can be downright scary. I hope Norie is right and Sev will warm up to Harry soon. Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Yes, this is Harry's worst nightmare right now, but things will end up getting better for him.
This story is so good!! :)
Aww! Poor Harry! So sad. But I do like how Snape's staying Snape in this. And the house elves are so cute!^^ Hopefully Sev's gunna learn a thing or two about Harry. Off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you thought Severus in IC. I wasn't sure about that.
Loving the story so far! You're style of writing keeps pulling me in deeper.
-JW.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind reviews!
This is really good. You said this is an eventual Snape adopts Harry fic.. Does that mean that Harry's eventually going to get free?
Your sense of humor came out it in this chapter, I enjoyed the few humorus comments like the 'snowball in hell' and Snape's dialogue. You write Snape well, I like him so far! I LOVE Norie and Zan! Seriously my favorite houseelves I have read about in fan fiction so far. I like how there old because I think it makes them more interesting, their polite but not over-eager.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Norie and Zan. It's funny because I almost didn't put them in the story, but then I thought they were needed to kind of be a bridge between Harry and Severus in the beginning, and it seemed to make sense to have them there on a nice big estate like Prince Hall.
Wow! Absolutely amazing! I'll admit, I was a little aprehensive about reading a "slavery" fic, but you've done very well with it. *shudders* I can't even begin to imagine myself in that position, and I feel sorry for both of them. I can't help but wonder how they'll both manage to survive for any length of time...Anyway, it's very good, keep it up! Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know a lot of people have doubts about a 'slavery' fic, and that's why I did say from the beginning that this story was about sensitive issues, but I really am trying to handle them with respect and I'm glad if someone is willing to give it a chance. Harry and Severus are both in a bad situation now, Harry especially, but things will eventually get better for them. I'll try to update as soon as I can.
I really like this story!!! I wasn't 100% sure when I started, nut I gave it a shot and I really like it! (and can't wait for an update!!) :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you gave it a chance, and hope you'll continue to enjoy it! I'll try to update soon, but I have to work on my other story, "Potions Professor" first.
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