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Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 3:59 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My heart just goes out to poor Harry. His fears and sorrows come across strongly in this chapter. By the end of this update I wanted to reach out to Harry give him a hug and adopt him into the family. Draco on the other hand I wanted to just smack him one. I hope he gets punished for doing an unknown spell onto Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I know, crazy as it sounds, I'm finding it hard to write some of this, just because I feel so badly for Harry.  But I just keep reminding myself that he'll be all right in the end.  I do have plans for Draco, and it may not exactly be a 'punishment' per se, but he's in for a rough time, too.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 3:19 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Poor Harry... he is in shock. And I don't think Snape's doing much better. Thank goodness for house elves :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You're right about both Harry and Severus...they are still in shock and trying to come to terms with how their lives have changed.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:54 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    yay great chapter kristeh! Love this story! =)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you do!  I have to admit, I love it too, lol!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:52 am
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter. It's perfectly believable to me that Harry would be stricken by this news and uncertain how to act. Prince Hall can't be what he expected… I can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you find Harry believable here.  I know I would be very uncertain how to act in his position.  No, Prince Hall isn't what he expected, and I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I do need to finish the next chapter for "Potions Professor" first.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:39 am
Reviewer: Wolverine (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry. I hope Norie is right and snape will eventually learn to at least tolerate him. great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, I think it's a safe bet that Severus will learn to tolerate Harry in the end.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 2:16 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    GREAT JOB!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!
    AGAIN GREAT WORK!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 1:54 am
Reviewer: CraftyMomChick (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying your new story very much, as I have your others. This one made me want to cry for Harry at the end of this chapter. Looking forward to future updates on this and Potions Professor.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Yeah, Harry is having a very difficult time now, poor kid.
Title: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008 1:43 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's total shock at the turn of events comes through very clearly in this. I don't think he's OOC--he's totally numb. And I think I might try to curb my temper, too, if I knew I could die from losing it. It will be interesting to watch both Severus and Harry learn the bounds of this spell. I still love the two house elves and fully expect them to light into Severus the first time he's cruel. And what a horrible responsibility this really is to a nasty but good man like Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm glad you can understand how Harry feels now.  I hope you will find it all interesting, I know I've got some scenes planned that I'm looking forward to writing, at least.  I love Norie and Zan, too, and it's kind of funny, because I debated about whether to put them in the story at first, but I think they can help Harry a bit, especially now when Severus isn't ready to be there for him yet. 

    And you're right, that it is hard for Severus, too, and not just because he's got to re-adjust the solitary lifestyle he's grown accustomed to, but because it is a moral dilemma for him.  He doesn't want to have a slave, but he has to, and it's the 'Potter brat' that he can't stand, but he also can't help feeling twinges of sympathy for.  He doesn't want to abuse Harry, and is trying to give him the respect that all people deserve, but he can't bring himself to be nice or gracious about it.  Severus has a lot of room to grow here.   


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