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Title: Chapter 6 23 Feb 2022 9:42 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    It's taking me way to long to click the "nextv button.
    OOOOH! I am not looking forward to this.
    ...
    I'm seriously procrastinating this.
Title: Chapter 6 08 Aug 2009 3:51 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    OH NO!!! Poor Harry! Why's he always unlucky? Hope Sev won't hurt him...terribly...I guess...

    No, but I really liked this chapter. I liked the line "Just wait until fall. Draco Malfoy was going to wish he'd never been sorted into Slytherin." It made me smile. And the line, "But he was still a Potter, and he was still a brat." It made me laugh.^^

    I'm happy I can go ahead to the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 6 30 May 2008 6:06 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    If I was not a fan of cliff-hangers I might be mad....Luckily I adore cliff-hangers and the authors who write them as wonderfully as you do. Will this book Romano be a part of the plot? Or did it just do it's part?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think the Romano book has served its purpose after this episode, but you never know...
Title: Chapter 6 16 Mar 2008 7:25 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    yikes! poor harry... doesn't snape know what it means when you 'assume' things? can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Chapter 7 will be up today, but I'm afraid it'll probably be another week or so before I can get chapter 8 up. 
Title: Chapter 6 16 Mar 2008 3:00 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I guess we needed something to get them talking to each other. Nice to see an update on this so soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, this whole incident with the journal will be a turning point.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 6 15 Mar 2008 11:40 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter and it's too bad neither of them are talking to each other though. It's interesting that Sev freed his elves and I'm looking forward to hearing more about Jeremiah, whoever he is.

    I like the idea of Severus's journal and it looks like they're going to have some kind of confrontation over the journal. Oh boy! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think it's one of Severus' better characteristics that he doesn't want anyone to be his slave, not the elves and not Harry, much as he despises Harry right now.  Jeremiah was a mean one, for sure.  There'll probably be little mentions of him here and there.  Thanks and I'll try!
Title: Chapter 6 15 Mar 2008 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    HI!!!!!! I've already read chapters 6 and 7 on another site, and i wanted to tell you your doing a GREAT JOB!!!! (BIG SMILEY FACE)I was wondering if you could give us readers an idea about how long it's going to take for Sev to discover that it was Pomfery who took the journal out and not Harry?
    Again really good job on slave child and potions proffesor.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus will probably find out in chapter 8.  I'm really glad you're enjoying the stories!

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