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Title: Chapter 8 23 Feb 2022 9:56 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I bet Snape feels good about himself now. Yep, asshole, you punished Harry unfairly and now, because you forgot about him (some blame taken away for having to save Dumbledore's life) he's going to have lung problems for the rest of his life. Revile in the ineptitude.
Title: Chapter 8 21 Oct 2017 3:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, biting on your lips to ease the pain in another part does help. I have tried it. I do it every month........
Title: Chapter 8 08 Aug 2009 5:52 am
Reviewer: Ivy-Green (Signed) [Report This]
    Now the tables are turned! Poor Sev!! But wait, Harry's still being unlucky too. Poor Harry!...Poor wizards!!

    Even though this actually gave me a headache because of tension, I still really liked it!^^ I always like high drama stories. I find them more interesting.

    Again, wonderful chapter. (Hope Sev doesn't kill himself)

    Author's Response: Thanks!  These past chapters were actually very difficult to write because I'm so softhearted.  I hated to have Harry in such pain...I never can bear torture scenes and such.  But I did think it was crucial to have Harry suffer because of Severus' misjudging him, and for Severus to have to accept that and not be able to deny it.  It was important to shake Severus enough that he would begin to see how wrong he'd been all along. 
Title: Chapter 8 30 May 2008 6:25 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    The truth comes out! Yay! Great chapter, I really felt for poor Harry. I can not WAIT to read the next chapter, off to read!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It was a hard chapter to write, but necessary too.
Title: Chapter 8 31 Mar 2008 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a mistake!!! Poor, poor Harry.

    Fabulous chapter, fabulous story!! Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Jan!  Chapter 9 is done, but I'm waiting to hear back from all my betas...I know they're all very busy with RL stuff right now, so we'll see. 
Title: Chapter 8 29 Mar 2008 5:06 am
Reviewer: MoonLightSilver (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
    You are doing a wonderfull job. Any chance of you makeing the next chapter long? And i was wondering, is Harry going to try to OFF HIMSELF soon? And what will Sev, Norie and Zan do about it. I'm just assuming that Norie and Zan will be a BIG help to Sev and Harry becoming close. I may be wrong, am I?
    Thank you for reading my review and for writing the story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to make the next chapter a little longer...mostly I just write til it's a good stopping point.  Harry is going to start thinking about suicide soon, but not actually do anything yet.  Thank you for reading and leaving a review! 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 6:46 pm
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this story is awesome too! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 12:27 pm
Reviewer: bkerrmom1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow... That is goung to be one serious guilt trip!! Excellent as always!

    Author's Response: Yeah, very serious guilt trip, huh?  Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 9:33 am
Reviewer: Keina (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter ! I just can't wait to see how Snape will react to that piece of information ! Please update soon, this story is really great !

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on chapter 9 now, hopefully it can be up in another few days. 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 3:41 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER?! JEEZ!!! THREE IN A ROW!! PLEASE OH PLEASE, I'D LIKE TO LIVE TO READ THE ENTIRE STORY!!! I agree and respect you reasons for these cliff hangers, HOWEVER, its still torture for your loyal fans.
    I really like how you wrote this chapter. Boy is Sev in for it! (May Merlin, Albus, Minerva, Norie, Zan, Poppy, and all of Harry's other friends have mercy on him!!)LOL!!!!!!
    If I were Harry I'd be terrified of so much as hearing Severus Snape's name. First he threatns to beat and starve him, refuses to listen to Harry's side of the story, Now THIS!! Sev's due for a long journey down GUILT LANE. Ohwell.
    Thanks for reading and writing!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I know, I know, I'm bad with cliffies...*ducks rotten fruit*  but at least I don't make you wait for a couple years to see how things turn out like Jo Rowling did!  Right?  Yeah, it's going to be interesting between Harry and Severus now.  Severus has to admit that he's been wrong (finally), and Harry begins to think that death might be better than living at Severus' mercy.   

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