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Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 2:46 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    i was wondering when he was going to figure it out!! good chapter... can hardly wait to see what he's going to do with the knowledge...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  What will Sev do now?  That's the tricky part, but it should make him rethink some things.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 2:10 am
Reviewer: SnowStalker (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Another wonderful chapter! I can't believe you ended it like that, though!! ...Or maybe I can, since the last chapter was actually a worse cliffhanger. Though I'm glad Snape's apparently realized his absolutely hugely horrendous mistake; I'd been wondering if Poppy would mention the incident or if Severus would actually give Harry a chance to explain. I'm just wondering what the rest of Snape's reaction will be, and of course Poppy won't be at all happy when she finds out...I also liked how Snape's emotions are in conflict, and he doesn't know what to think or feel--it's the first step towards him seeing Harry, instead of James Potter reborn (except for the eyes, of course). Anyway, thanks for the chapter and update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Severus has taken the first step towards realising he's been wrong about Harry...a very hard thing for him to admit, which is why I made this so horrible for poor Harry.  I hated to do it, but I thought Severus would have to be really shaken up to see that he'd been wrong.  Otherwise, he'd have probably just avoided Harry as much as possible and it would have taken years before they'd gotten to know one another.  I don't think I'm patient enough to drag it out for years.
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHHHHH!! Evil cliffhanger! Awesome chapter! I loved seeing Harry's pov and I sooo can't wait until the next chapter. I really wanna see the emotional fallout after this!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, some emotional fallout is due, isn't it? 
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 1:27 am
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    More!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on it!
Title: Chapter 8 28 Mar 2008 12:30 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! I loved it. I loved Snape's discovery. You have this developing beautifully.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Kim!  Your help is invaluable!  *smiley face*
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 11:52 pm
Reviewer: ALD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this story. Please update soon

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try!
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Trueangelofdark (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh dear lord! you actually expect us to be able to wait for another chapter after that!!! You've GOT to be kidding. That was so fantastic! please please update soon. My heart always feels frgile after reading chapters of this story and I never think it'll make it to the next one so please update before it gives out on me! Elle xx

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm sorry...I am working on it as fast as I can.  I've begun chapter 9, but it will still probably be a couple days before it's posted.  My sister-in-law's wedding is tomorrow and rehearsal dinner is tonight.  I'm hoping to finish the chapter tonight after the dinner, but if I don't, I know I'll be busy all day tomorrow and probably too worn out to write tomorrow night.  But I'm working on it as fast as I can, so tell your heart to hang on.

    Oh, and thanks a lot, btw!  

     

Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 2:05 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thankyou so much for updating. I've been checking everyday - I'm really hooked on this story, and you're doing a great job.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm really glad you're enjoying it!  Probably will be Sunday at the earliest before another update and maybe even later, but I'm working on it.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 1:34 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous) [Report This]
    And Snape learns that he may have hurt Harry permanently... for nothing
    Way to go, the great bat!

    More please!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope to have chapter 9 finished tonight, but then I'll need to send it to my betas before posting.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 8:23 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, now Severus realises and what will happen now? Oooh, I hope that he thinks a little bit better of Harry from now on!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, he's going to begin to change, at least.  Probably not too much mush for a bit yet, but there'll be plenty of that later on.  

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