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Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 8:12 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. Poor Harry, I'm glad Snape is going to realise what a HUGE mistake he has made. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on it!
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 5:28 am
Reviewer: Galaxyskier (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow...I have been following this story since the beginning (and your other one as well!), and I have to say that this is probably the best chapter you have EVER written.

    I could actually almost feel the pain Harry was in but also the emotional pain that Snape was going through as well and only a true writer can do that. :)

    Great job! Truely amazing chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you!  That means a lot, because this chapter was hard to write, and really, I was dissatisfied with it, and afraid it would disappoint readers.  So I'm really glad you all have seemed to enjoy it!

    Your comments about being able to empathise with both Harry and Severus mean a lot, too, because that is what I'm trying to do...to show both viewpoints, and even if Severus is a jerk to Harry right now, to show that he does have the potential to be really great with Harry.  It's hard to do.

    Thanks again! 

       

Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 5:07 am
Reviewer: dancegirl01mom (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter - and the way Sev found out what really happened was awesome. Can't wait for the next update - and to see how Sev handles his guilt, and how he acts with Harry!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on it.  I admit I'm a little nervous about the next few chapters...it's a tricky point in the relationship between Severus and Harry, where they can begin to get to know one another, but not become too close too soon.  I'll just have to do my best, I suppose.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 5:03 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    i think i stopped breathing while reading the description of harry's trouble with it. wow. nice and powerful and very easy to get lost in.

    oh.... yeah, can't wait to see what's next now that Severus knows that Harry didn't read his journal.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  As for Sev, well, he will be forced to admit that he's misjudged Harry about some things, and maybe it will make him begin to see that he's been wrong all along.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 4:49 am
Reviewer: Morgana_White (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Severus finally knows the truth but to end the chapter like that... *groans* I really hope you are going to update soon. Very soon! Because the waiting is killing me!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Sorry for the cliffie...I guess I'll have to try to work on not ending chapters on one, but so often they make a good stopping point!  I am already working on chapter 9.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 4:23 am
Reviewer: Eniledam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your writing is so engaging! I bet Severus really really regrets that temper now! oh boy... please don't leave us in agony too long!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Severus will feel pretty guilty, but he does have it coming, don't you think?  I've begun chapter 9 and hope to finish it tonight and get it sent off to my betas.
Title: Chapter 8 27 Mar 2008 2:56 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Whew! What a horrible experience you put Harry through, and now Severus gets to go through the horrible experience of terrible guilt. Harry's ability to forgive will be a needed balm.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, I know it was horrible.  It was hard to write...I'm a real softie.  I can never read torture scenes in fics.  But I did think it would take somthing pretty drastic, and something where Severus had to admit that he'd been in the wrong, to make him open his eyes and be willing to get to know the real Harry.  And something pretty drastic to make Harry decide that he'd rather die than live at Severus' mercy.

    Thanks a lot! 


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