Another great chapter - with some great lines. Severus is reallt experiencing a paridigm shift in his thoughts towards Harry - "All the people he respected said he was wrong about Harry" was a great line. Can't wait to see how that plays out - and when Harry will start to really accept Severus's apology. Loved this chapter and anxiously awaiting the next!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'd hoped that it would be a believable way for Severus to begin to change his attitude about Harry...realising that all the people whose opinion he values are fond of Harry and have been telling him that he was wrong.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 01 Apr 2008 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Silent_Soliloquy (Anonymous)
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Ah--another wondeful IC chapter. You portray Harry beautifully. I have come across some stories (even a few here) where Harry is extremely defiant and rude. You portray Severus rather well, too. There is some great interaction going on here. Your story is believable, well written, and a unique story idea to boot! Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you find them IC. I try, but everyone does have their own opinions about the characters are like, I think. But really, I have always thought that Harry was really pretty respectful overall, in canon. He talked back to the Dursleys at times, but then, they were horrible to him. And I remember him mouthing off to Snape a few times in HBP, but Snape in canon was pretty horrible to Harry, too. I do think Harry tried, but Snape pushed him too far at times, and Harry wouldn't be human if he hadn't resented it.
Why thank you, Kristeh! I love them! mmm! and I love this chapter. I like how you portray Severus as being remorseful and I have a feeling we'll see him have a long talk with Harry sometime soon! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love sweets, too! Too much, actually, I have to really watch it. Yep, Sev's feeling pretty bad right about now, and he and Harry will talk in the next chapter, although don't expect instant mush...we've still got to build up to that.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 01 Apr 2008 12:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Eva (Signed)
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It was a great chapter and I loved it. I also liked the Honeydukes' sweets, they were yummy. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's hard to beat sweets, isn't it? I like chocolate best myself.
| Title: Chapter 9
| 01 Apr 2008 12:18 pm
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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*eats sweets* Why thankyou. Great job on this chapter - I can't wait to see what happens when Harry and Severus are alone in the manor again.
Author's Response: Thank you! Things should start to get a bit better for Harry and Sev, but they still have a ways to go.
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