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Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 3:36 am
Reviewer: PyroChilde (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love how you write Harry's thoughts and emotions, though reading them breaks my heart. You're really talented!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry is in a dark place right now, and it will be a while before it gets better, but it'll come.
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 3:10 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whooo its good keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 10 15 Apr 2008 1:55 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Snape seems suitably sorry for his behavior and maybe is realizing that Harry is not the boy he thought he was.

    Harry's thoughts are pretty dark, though, and he obviously still distrusts Snape and is very cautious with him.

    You are writing this very well. I'm glad that you're going to make your characters work for their future relationship.

    Please keep updating! Thanks.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Harry is still pretty distrustful (and who can blame him, really?) and it will take a while before they become close.  Thank you for reading! 

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