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Title: Chapter 11 28 Apr 2008 12:28 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter, Kristeh! I enjoyed it. With Harry being so uncertain and suspicious of Severus and Severus being so tentative around him. It was very well done. I was really glad to see Severus giving Harry that nice room, nearby so he can take care of him if he needs to and I was really glad Snape agreed to allow Harry to write back to his friends. I am really looking forward to seeing how this all plays out now that they're back at the house. Great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yes, Harry and Severus are both so uncertain right now.  Severus is really beginning to want things to be different, but isn't entirely sure how to admit that he was wrong and make amends, or if he even can do that, and Harry of course doesn't dare trust him yet. 

    I'm glad you liked the new rooms.  I saw that as being kind of an important step for Severus.  Before, when he stuck Harry way up on the top floor all alone, he was trying to put as much distance between them as possible.  Giving Harry the suite of rooms next to him was a lot more than just giving him nicer rooms, or even more than being able to keep an eye on him.  It was really acknowledging that Harry belongs at Prince Hall now and is a part of his life, though Severus himself might not consciously realise that yet. 

    And letting Harry write back to his friends was one more of those small things, that can really mean a lot.  It would have been a petty mean-ness to have refused Harry, and before Severus probably would have done just that, but now he can see that there's really no reason to deny Harry, and that it is one little thing he can do to try to make up for the past mistakes he's made.

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 11:53 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice job with the requisite "We're still tip-toeing around each other" chapter. I love it when Severus figures out what Harry needs without being told.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I hate trying to write that "tip-toeing around" phase.  Writing mean, snarky Sev and Harry can be fun, and I adore close, loving Sev and Harry, but that in-between stage is really hard!  Glad you liked it!  And I did want to show Severus starting to make some changes in his attitude, wanting to understand Harry and to help, so I'm glad that worked all right.  
Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Morgana_White (Signed) [Report This]
    It was a short chapter but great nevertheless! I'm glad Severus gave Harry the new rooms and I hope Harry will stay in them from now on and won't go back to his old room.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Hmm, what will Harry do about the room situation?  Right now he's wanting to move back to the old one, but a week can be a long time so he just might change his mind by then...
Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 11:15 am
Reviewer: Eva (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great update! I loved the chapter though it was teeny tiny smaller than the other ones. Oh, I'll get over it! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm going to try to make the next chapter longer.  It had just been a while since I'd updated, and I started feeling like I should just go ahead and get something posted, even if it wasn't very long.
Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 4:29 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    NICE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not what i expected though, but still good. Thanks for writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 11 27 Apr 2008 4:18 am
Reviewer: Cecilia Farrell (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhh, i know you already know but that was a little short! a bit of a filler, i really really like it, its got a certain rigid off feeling about it the whole atmosphere, a kind of stilfing sadness to it. I wonder when they'll find out what Harry's up to, and whether he'll mobilise his plans while he's with Snape? but if he can't be more than a certain distance away and for a certain amount of time how is he going to off Voldie? Perhaps he could side apparate with Snape to a death eater meetin, can't see that going down too well. Oh well. Please please give us more. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Voldie will make his appearance before summer is over.  I'm still working on the details, but I have the general idea of it already planned.  Hopefully it will live up to expectations, though I admit I'm more focused on Severus, Harry, and the emotional angsty side of things.

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