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Title: Chapter 12 20 May 2008 7:42 am
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    wohoo I got so excited when i saw you had updated! One of my favorite stories! Cant wait for the next chapter. Do you think that Harry is going to confide in Snape eventually?

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm so happy you like it!  Harry will eventually confide in Severus, and they will be very close, but not yet.  It's really hard for me to hold back, but there are some other things that have to happen first, and I want it to all seem believable and not too rushed.
Title: Chapter 12 20 May 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Snape is sufficiently humble -- I'm glad to see that he is trying to be nice to Harry and must realize that the real Harry is different than he thought.

    Harry is definitely cowed, but it is beieveable that he would be in this situation.

    Good job with this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus has accepted that he was wrong about Harry and he really does want to get to know him better.  He really is reaching out to Harry as best he knows how.  Glad you think Harry is believable here.  I know he is a bit meek, but so much has happened to him lately, and he really is severely depressed, so I hoped it would make sense.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 12 20 May 2008 5:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm glad Sev is trying to get along with Harry. That was nice of him to return the cloak too. Hope you can update again soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus is trying, for sure.  Returning the cloak was important, both to help their relationship, and I'm thinking Harry may need it at a future point in the story, too.  I'll try to update again soon!
Title: Chapter 12 20 May 2008 4:43 am
Reviewer: lisas_castle (Signed) [Report This]
    Looks like Harry might just be starting to realize that Snape doesn't hate him? WTG Snape for showing him a bit of trust with the cloak! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!  Yes, things are beginning to change between Harry and Sev, though Harry isn't ready to trust Severus yet, but he is starting to wonder what's going on.  And I was really proud of Severus for giving back the Firebolt and cloak, too.  It was a big step for him.

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