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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so happy you like it! Harry will eventually confide in Severus, and they will be very close, but not yet. It's really hard for me to hold back, but there are some other things that have to happen first, and I want it to all seem believable and not too rushed.
Harry is definitely cowed, but it is beieveable that he would be in this situation. Good job with this story. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Severus has accepted that he was wrong about Harry and he really does want to get to know him better. He really is reaching out to Harry as best he knows how. Glad you think Harry is believable here. I know he is a bit meek, but so much has happened to him lately, and he really is severely depressed, so I hoped it would make sense. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus is trying, for sure. Returning the cloak was important, both to help their relationship, and I'm thinking Harry may need it at a future point in the story, too. I'll try to update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, things are beginning to change between Harry and Sev, though Harry isn't ready to trust Severus yet, but he is starting to wonder what's going on. And I was really proud of Severus for giving back the Firebolt and cloak, too. It was a big step for him. |
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