cant wait for you to write the next chapters after reading the end notes of this one! i dont think your harry is too OOC, he has just lost his freedom and living with someone who he doesnt think likes him, poor lad! i hope you can update asap cause im all riled up to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Often I can't wait to get it all written either. There are so many scenes in my head that I just can't wait to put on paper. I'm glad you understand about Harry!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 29 May 2008 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous)
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enjoyed this as always. looking forward to your next update... especially with the "preview" you gave us in the chapter end notes! harry's yes sir/no sir make perfect sense to me, not only because of the spell or because he's not sure snape won't hurt him again, but also given his plans to endure whatever comes until he can rejoin his parents... the accidental lung burning was definitely a huge character-changing moment for harry, and that came thru very clearly to me. he is more than a little broken now.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's just wonderful to me when readers understand how I'm wanting to portray Harry (or other charactes) and what they're feeling and thinking! You're absolutely right about how Harry is feeling right now, and he's very broken, yes. Thank you for your insightful post!
Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad Harry got to fly, if only it helped keep him happy. Hope you'll update again soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Getting the Firebolt back and being able to fly was good for Harry, and I think it was important for the developing relationship between him and Severus, too. Thanks again!
Yay yay updates! I love this story its brilliant. oohhh I like the word 'sequel'. :)))
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not 100% decided on the sequel, but I have had some ideas for one and it's tempting. But there's still a good ways to go on this one first, so we'll see.
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