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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you do.
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Author's Response: That's okay, Kaity, I know you've got a busy summer planned. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, I love softie Sev, too. I'm not sure if they're ready for a real hug yet, but we'll see...
But really, this was a great chapter. I love Harry, eh's just so perfectly written. What's gonna happen with Harry? It's a nightmare, right? Well, please update again soon! -Elise Author's Response: Because cliffies are fun! You know you love them, Elise! Thank you!
It's really good to read a story by an author who thinks things through - I hadn't considered that Harry would be unable to attack Severus due to the spell, but you have, and you have a solution, not a *let's forget about that and create a plot hole so I can do what I want* situation. I applaud you. Good job on this chapter - will Remus feature in this as a more central character, or will he just disappear from Harry's life again? Author's Response: Puppy-dog eyes are hard to resist, aren't they? We have a little beagle with the sweetest face and the biggest brown eyes...it's a good thing she's not clever enough to be manipulative because otherwise she could rule the world! Thank you! I do try to have things planned out. Course I'm not perfect, or a full-time writer who can devote hours to it, so sometimes things do slip by me, but I try. Remus will be in the story later, I think (or in the sequel) , but probably more of a minor character. |
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