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Title: Chapter 16 24 Feb 2022 3:04 am
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've always maintained that Harry and Snape are so similar that if they'd even given each other a chance, they would have gotten along AMAZINGLY!! They aren't quite the same, but similar enough and I also think that's part of why they didn't end up getting along, because neither likes themselves very much, so what they did see of themselves in the other, they wouldn't like.
Title: Chapter 16 27 Apr 2014 1:51 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    aw, so cute
Title: Chapter 16 21 Apr 2012 3:58 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    You're my child now . . . awwwww. Your Severus is great so far. I wonder when he'll find out about Harry's wish to die.
Title: Chapter 16 13 Sep 2009 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Ebbtide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG. Awwww! I loved this Chapter to death. I mean, this whole story has been awesome so far, but this chapter = THE BEST EV-er! :D Thanks, for sharing your talent and your story.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm happy you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 16 06 Aug 2008 7:12 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    Still amazed by your story and style of writing; great work!

    The only thing I would say that kind of makes the story less believable to me is the fact that everybody calls Harry "child" right out to his face. I think Harry being the age he is would have a definite problem with being called a child. I think you mentioned he had a problem with it once, but after that he seemed fine with it?

    Can't wait to read more!

    -JW.
Title: Chapter 16 25 Jun 2008 7:26 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again I totally love this chapter. My favourite line was:
    "Never again," he whispered. "You're my child now, and no one will ever hurt you again."
    That was the best! I love the way that Snape was all angry when he saw the scars on Harry's hand and Harry was still a little scared but he got over it enough to acknowledge that he would not like to be in Umbridge's shoes when Severus meets her next! I shudder at the thought! I would hate to be her too!
    I wish that Harry would say something about his thoughts to Severus but not quite yet because even if Severus happens to overhear him thinking about suicide in Harry's dreams or something it will be a difficult topic to bring up if Harry doesn't really trust him fully.
    Make Sev hug Harry!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  I'm so happy you do.  Yes, I know that line from Severus is moving pretty fast, but I just couldn't help putting it in, and it helps Severus to be open when Harry is asleep and doesn't hear him.  Harry doesn't fully trust yet, but I think he's making some progress.  I wouldn't want to be Umbridge either.  I think Severus could make the centaurs look tame.

    And they can't hug yet, lol!  It would mess up my plans.  That chapter is still a little ways off.   Thanks again...I enjoy reading your comments!  

     

Title: Chapter 16 25 Jun 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ahhhh... good chapter! snape has really come a long way. the final scene is just lovely!

    wondering how harry will reveal his sadly suicidal urges to snape...
Title: Chapter 16 25 Jun 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ahhhh... good chapter! snape has really come a long way. the final scene is just lovely!

    wondering how harry will reveal his sadly suicidal urges to snape...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yes, I'm so proud of Sev, lol!  How will Harry reveal his suicidal tendencies?  I'm considering two different options right now, but I'm pretty sure which one I'm going with,...but I can't write it for a few more chapters *Evil laugh*

Title: Chapter 16 25 Jun 2008 2:53 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Again you amaze me! I already have this story on my Fav List yet somehow you've managed to make me love this story MORE! I LOVED the last part of this chapter. I hope we see more of Softy Sev! Thanks for the update i look forward to it! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  *blushes*  Well, considering it's me, I think softy Sev is a given, lol!
Title: Chapter 16 24 Jun 2008 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I especially loved the last part of it. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you did.

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