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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it.
The only thing I would say that kind of makes the story less believable to me is the fact that everybody calls Harry "child" right out to his face. I think Harry being the age he is would have a definite problem with being called a child. I think you mentioned he had a problem with it once, but after that he seemed fine with it? Can't wait to read more! -JW.
"Never again," he whispered. "You're my child now, and no one will ever hurt you again." That was the best! I love the way that Snape was all angry when he saw the scars on Harry's hand and Harry was still a little scared but he got over it enough to acknowledge that he would not like to be in Umbridge's shoes when Severus meets her next! I shudder at the thought! I would hate to be her too! I wish that Harry would say something about his thoughts to Severus but not quite yet because even if Severus happens to overhear him thinking about suicide in Harry's dreams or something it will be a difficult topic to bring up if Harry doesn't really trust him fully. Make Sev hug Harry! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you do. Yes, I know that line from Severus is moving pretty fast, but I just couldn't help putting it in, and it helps Severus to be open when Harry is asleep and doesn't hear him. Harry doesn't fully trust yet, but I think he's making some progress. I wouldn't want to be Umbridge either. I think Severus could make the centaurs look tame. And they can't hug yet, lol! It would mess up my plans. That chapter is still a little ways off. Thanks again...I enjoy reading your comments!
wondering how harry will reveal his sadly suicidal urges to snape...
wondering how harry will reveal his sadly suicidal urges to snape... Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I'm so proud of Sev, lol! How will Harry reveal his suicidal tendencies? I'm considering two different options right now, but I'm pretty sure which one I'm going with,...but I can't write it for a few more chapters *Evil laugh*
Author's Response: Thank you! *blushes* Well, considering it's me, I think softy Sev is a given, lol!
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