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Reviews For Slave Child
I occurs to me, Snape is being really great, and I don't want to take away from that. However, Harry is being really great also. He is not being petulant or resentful towards Snape, not even in his private thoughts. Both of them deserve major props. :) :) Author's Response: Thanks again. Yes, Harry is being very open to seeing Severus in a new light, too. Perhaps its a bit OOC, but I think the slavery spell and everything that has happened since has had a big effect on Harry and he's feeling very insecure and unsure of things right now.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm late in replying to you too! Sorry about that. I'm really glad that you're enjoying Slave Child. I hope you've caught up on sleep since then, lol. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks, Scorpia!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I think your English is fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I certainly hope she'll be long-lived, and since I'm about the most impatient person in the world, I guess I can't call you a brat, can I? Glad you like Sev and Harry!
Bravo. And no it's not pathetic to start a group for a story that is brilliant in every sense of the word, and which has more than 15 chapters! Things are warming up, can't wait for the next installment. Cecilia :) Author's Response: Thank you! We're starting to get to the fun part of the story for me too. I'm looking forward to the next few chapters. Thank you, too, for your kind words about "The Prince and the Seeker". I started to wait on beginning the group because there's still just so much that will happen in SC, and I thought it might make more sense to wait til later when there might be more to talk about...but then I thought 'what the heck...go ahead and do it', lol.
I didn't catch the reference to Jamie at first, until Snape explained - I think it's a good one and shows just how much more tolerant Snape has become and bold Harry has become. I love the efforts Snape's making to forging a friendship, but still realistically slow and awkward. Keep up the great work! (: Also - well done for working out the computer stuff! I'll take a dekko. Author's Response: Thank you! I love Severus, but close personal relationships are kind of new to him and I think he's floundering a little bit. He's just wanting Harry to stay, but he knows that it's wrong to want to keep him a slave, so he feels ashamed. It's actually not that he wants Harry to be a slave, but that he wants Harry to stay and he fears that Harry would leave if the slavery spell weren't forcing him to live with Severus now (and Severus is probably right about that because I do think Harry would leave if he had the chance to right now.) Yep, they're still taking steps towards one another, but I think they've made a lot of progress. And I was so proud of myself about figuring out the computer stuff, lol!
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