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Reviews For Slave Child
That ending was totally unexpected. Does Snape find out about Harry's suicide plans after this escapade? Do they stand and fight, or apparate away? I thought the book was a nice touch. The reference to Ron and Hermione was clever too. Was Gladrags your idea? I don't remember it from the book. Oh, is Severus supposed to be angry when Harry touches his arm (not at him obviously), because the 'besides' makes it sound as though he is angry plus something. Do you really mean it like that? Author's Response: Thank you! Severus will find out about the suicide plans, but not for a little bit yet. Glad you liked the book. No, Gladrags is not my idea...well, I read that there is a store called Gladrags Wizardwear on the HP lexicon, but I made it very prestigious and expensive. I'm not sure if it really is. I don't know where it's mentioned in the HP books, but it must be somewhere since it's in the lexicon. No, Severus is not angry at all when Harry touches his arm. He's emotional...maybe a little surprised, but glad and hopeful that Harry is beginning to forgive him and feel more comfortable with him...but Severus is still uncertain about displaying his emotions and he's reserved, and Harry isn't sure what to make of the emotions he can see in Severus' eyes. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, I think their cover is about to be busted. I hope I can get chapter 20 finished soon and update again.
anywayz take your time i understand all the best Author's Response: Thanks! I've begun chapter 20. Not sure how long it'll take me to finish it, but I'm going to work on it some more tonight.
UPDATEEE nOW Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I said it before, the 'Wronski book' scene was my favourite part of the chapter, because it was something that Severus did purely for Harry's enjoyment, and it is a clue that Severus will not revert back to his old ways once they're back at school, if Harry picked up on that. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, I think it is rather hard for Harry to start thinking of Severus by his first name after five years of thinking of him as 'Snape'. It's also a big sign that they're becoming closer and Harry isn't sure he's ready for them to be that close, but he's making an effort, and it's getting a little easier for him.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update again soon.
is harry still going to feel suicidal now that snape is treating him so much better? Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry is still suicidal right now. He is happier than he was at first, but part of that is because he's built up this idea that he'll be able to go be with his parents and Sirius and then everything will be perfect, and until then he just has to make the best of things. He isn't consciously thinking, "Oh, I'm happier now so I should reconsider the whole suicide thing." He's just going along until he can be with his 'real' family again. The idea that he's going to get to be with his family and be free again, hopefully soon, is very ingrained at this point and it's really part of what is helping him to feel better. He doesn't really have to think about the slavery spell and the impact it's going to have on his whole life as long as he's convinced himself that it's only a temporary situation. I realised that may seem to contradict what I said in an earlier response, when I said that the slavery spell is never far from Harry's mind, but what I mean is that Harry hasn't forgotten about the slavery spell, but he's not really having to deal with it because he's decided that he's going to escape it through death and be with his loved ones as soon as possible. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! Oops, you're right about the eye colour. I need to go back and fix that. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wonder if Sev and Harry will listen to your advice, Hmmm? |
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