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Reviews For Slave Child
I really enjoyed their shopping excursion and Harry finally really being treated special for his birthday. Hey, can I find those magically altering clothes somewhere for my kids! That was a brilliant invention. You're writing on the next chapter as I type this, right? Right? Author's Response: Thank you, Cathy! Well, if causing destruction, attempted murder, and general mayhem is your idea of acceptable birthday party activities, why then Voldie's just come to join in the fun, lol. I need the magically altering clothes for my kids too. If only... Well, I'm not writing yet, but I will in another day or so. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really, really hate cliffies, too, when I'm the reader. I guess I'm a hypocrite *sigh*. I'll try to update again soon though!
Author's Response: Thank you! Nope, Voldemort didn't know Harry was there. As far as he knows, Harry's still ensconced at Privet Drive. I really enjoyed writing the part where Harry touched Severus' arm, too. Another little step... Thanks again!
Author's Response: Sorry...I'll try to update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry about the cliffie, but it was just a good stopping point for that chapter. I'll try to get the next one written soon, how about that? I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I just love Harry and Severus.
The "Wronski book" scene was very touching. It's interesting that Harry asked if he had permission to play and Severus gave it -- underlines the slave relationship that they have even though they do not discuss it much. Author's Response: Ha, you'll never take me alive! Lol, actually I'm pretty easy to find, I suppose. But no worries...I will work on the next chapter soon. I'm so glad you liked the Wronski book scene...that was my favourite part of the chapter. And no, they don't discuss the slavery relationship often, but it's never far from Harry's mind, at least. They will have to talk about it more in the future for Harry to start the healing process, though.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, Polyjuice will soon be wearing off...I'm not sure Harry's going to just go hide, though.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll work on chapter 20 next week, and yes, Voldie's attacking Diagon Alley on Harry's birthday is a symbolic move. He had no way of knowing that Harry would actually be there. |
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