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Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:56 pm
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, man...that cliffie was evil personified. I don't think Voldy is showing up to give Harry a surprise birthday party (or is he? Hmmm....)

    I really enjoyed their shopping excursion and Harry finally really being treated special for his birthday. Hey, can I find those magically altering clothes somewhere for my kids! That was a brilliant invention.

    You're writing on the next chapter as I type this, right? Right?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Cathy!  Well, if causing destruction, attempted murder, and general mayhem is your idea of acceptable birthday party activities, why then Voldie's just come to join in the fun, lol.

    I need the magically altering clothes for my kids too.  If only...

    Well, I'm not writing yet, but I will in another day or so.  Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:44 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ALL OF YOUR LOYAL FANS?!!!! LOL! Seriously though, this chapter was GREAT! Hate the cliffie though. But yes (sighes) they keep us on our toes. PLEASE!!!!!!!update soon!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really, really hate cliffies, too, when I'm the reader.  I guess I'm a hypocrite *sigh*.  I'll try to update again soon though!
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, that was a very nice, calm, peaceful chapter...until you brought Voldemort along! Sheesh, Kristeh. That was crazy unexpected. Did Voldemort know Harry was going to be there? How could he? Oh boy, this is so exciting. Can't wait to see what happens next! Oh, and loved that part with Severus gazing at the spot where Harry had touched in on the arm. Made my gut lurch. Well done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Nope, Voldemort didn't know Harry was there.  As far as he knows, Harry's still ensconced at Privet Drive.  I really enjoyed writing the part where Harry touched Severus' arm, too.  Another little step...

    Thanks again! 

     

Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 7:01 pm
Reviewer: robokay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can not belive you left it there..that is so mean... *cries*

    Author's Response: Sorry...I'll try to update again soon!
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh man! i just got back off of holiday to find 2 new chapters and i was all excited cause this is one of my fave reads and now the cliffe? that really is mean! i love the way harry and sev are starting to bond, the whole gradual process is so cute and realistic that they didnt just become soppy at the start, even though i wanted sev to hug him after his nightmare! seriously looking forward to more and hoping harry and sev escape unhurt!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Sorry about the cliffie, but it was just a good stopping point for that chapter.  I'll try to get the next one written soon, how about that?  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  I just love Harry and Severus. 
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 5:57 pm
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    If you do take a break, we'll have to hunt you down!! (LOL)

    The "Wronski book" scene was very touching. It's interesting that Harry asked if he had permission to play and Severus gave it -- underlines the slave relationship that they have even though they do not discuss it much.

    Author's Response: Ha, you'll never take me alive!  Lol, actually I'm pretty easy to find, I suppose.  But no worries...I will work on the next chapter soon.  I'm so glad you liked the Wronski book scene...that was my favourite part of the chapter.  And no, they don't discuss the slavery relationship often, but it's never far from Harry's mind, at least.  They will have to talk about it more in the future for Harry to start the healing process, though. 
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Azalea (Signed) [Report This]
    ahh kristeh!!! lol great chapter! Oh no they just ran out of poly juice! They better go hide in the book store imo like in a closet somewhere

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Polyjuice will soon be wearing off...I'm not sure Harry's going to just go hide, though.
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 12:13 pm
Reviewer: ankita (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey don't take a break now...i'd die out of curosity...wonderful chapter as always...by the way voldemort's attacking on harry's b'day its symbolic...isn't it??? or u have something else in mind???
Title: Chapter 19 04 Jul 2008 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hey don't take a break now...i'd die out of curosity....wonderful chapter as always...waiting for next...btw voldermort's attacking on harry's b'day its symbolic isn't it??

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll work on chapter 20 next week, and yes, Voldie's attacking Diagon Alley on Harry's birthday is a symbolic move.  He had no way of knowing that Harry would actually be there. 

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