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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I do remember that chapter being very difficult to write.
Also, I thought you did alright with the action and stuff. I am also weak in that area. I really hate writing action and fighting scenes. So kudos to you! :D Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I like the emotional scenes much better.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kim! This chapter was fun to write, I'm really glad you liked it.
Anyway, I thought it was really good, I could see the scene really well - the barrels, the cobbles, the panic... I'm trying to remember if Snape had to give up being a spy after taking Harry in... So, does Harry no longer feel like suicide? Did he defeat Voldy by loveing Snape protectively enough? Or something along those lines? I'll find out tomorrow. (: Oh, and I thought the killing of Voldemort was well done, similar to the book (as was George's ear btw - well done on that) I thought for an instant it would be the gold stream again, but something must have changed.
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Author's Response: Oh, thank you! No, Harry won't be freed from the slavery spell just because of Voldemort's death. His thoughts about being free are referring to his decision to kill himself once he'd defeated Voldemort. Harry sees his death as a means of freedom right now.
Somebody kill that BellaBitch already Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, Bella's pretty bad, isn't she?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll explain more about how Harry killed Voldie in chapter 21, but it's really not a big secret or anything original. You can figure it out on your own probably. I did think Harry would find it hard to hide in safety when others are in danger, too. Thanks again!
I have the same question as another reviewer, which will wait to be resolved in maybe the next chapter? If Harry *does* die (even momentarily because I can't imagine you killing him off) how does this affect the slave bond? Poor Severus. He's so attached to Harry now I imagine he'll be going into a full fledge panic attack soon if Harry's looking like he's at death's door. Gee, think you can pump out another chapter as fast as you did this one? My fingernails may not survive it if you don't! Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy! >>>You really have mastered the evil cliffhanger, haven't you? I suppose so...that's what people keep telling me! I just stop when I think it's at a point that will keep people wanting more...can I help it if people call me evil, lol? The question about Harry dying and the effects on the slave bond is very interesting...and that's all I'm going to say about that! Yes, Severus is going to be all angsty, dealing with Harry's injuries and feeling regrets over his own actions...poor guy. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon. Thanks again!
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