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Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 8:21 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting that you chose to have George lose his ear in this universe as well as canon. I was flabbergasted that you killed Voldemort already. This will definitely bring Harry's suicidal tendencies to the fore since he defeated Voldemort and didn't die.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Well, I thought it might be a little more realistic if the good guys didn't come out of battle unscathed, but at least I didn't kill them off. 

    >>>I was flabbergasted that you killed Voldemort already.

    Well, the story is about Severus' and Harry's relationship really.  Voldemort's defeat is secondary, and it needed to happen before other events could.  But there's still a lot planned...we're not close to the end.  And yep, Harry's suicidal tendencies will become obvious before much longer. 

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Tsuby (Signed) [Report This]
    No cliffie, please, please!! I need more! :)
    By the way, I perfectly understand that you find it difficult to write action scenes. It's the same for me, well maybe for me it's the dialogues... anyway... I loved this chapter, really great as usual!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  It's funny how we all have our preferences on reading and writing, isn't it?    
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an incredible chapter. I totally loved it. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, and by soon I mean today. ;)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  So much needed to happen in this chapter, I was almost scared of writing it, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  Well, 21 probably won't happen today, but I'll try to get it up before the weekend.
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ANOTHER CLIFFE! :( I'm very sad now! LOL!!:) Great chapter! I noticed that you, like JKR, do not want george to keep his ear. Lol. Please update soon. The suspense is killing me!
    Again, GREAT WORK!
    Thanks.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I think I'm famous for cliffies, or maybe infamous is the better term, lol.  As for George and his ear, well, at least I'm not killing everyone off like JKR did.  I'll try to update again soon, thanks!

     

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Voldemort is dead yeah but you never turn your back on Bellatrix...glad that everyone saw Sev being tortured by Voldie for being a traitor so it would be publically known that he was on the side of light...question if Harry dies for like less than a minute and is revived would the slave bond be broken???

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yep, Bellatrix is evil.  To me, she's as bad as Voldemort himself, if not worse.  And yes, it is good that now no one can question Severus' allegiance.

    >>>if Harry dies for like less than a minute and is revived would the slave bond be broken???

    Interesting question, *evil grin* 

      

Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! Loved the action. Can't wait for the angst and mush part,I love it to.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you liked the action part.  I was very nervous about writing this chapter; maybe one reason it's so short.  Mush and angst coming up, yes!
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 5:20 pm
Reviewer: kittykat91419 (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! Cliffie!! Hopefully there is more soon. I think you did very well with the action.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I'll probably begin chapter 21 in a couple of days.
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 4:41 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoot!!!! Freaking good. keep it up

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 4:05 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Short but excellent! Actually, I think short and exciting is the best way to deal with battles. And I don't mind at all that Voldemort's death was what some might consider anti-climatic. Actually, I think it is better that way. It's harder to make a martyr of him. I know that Sev and Harry will eventually be all right but I hope someone gets Bella real quick! Good work and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  We definitely don't want old Voldie becoming a martyr...he doesn't deserve that.  As for dear Bella, she'll be on her way to Azkaban again soon, but she may be one of the villains in the sequel.
Title: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008 2:27 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    What a horrible place to leave us, please update soon. Awesome story by the way.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try.

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