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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I thought it might be a little more realistic if the good guys didn't come out of battle unscathed, but at least I didn't kill them off. >>>I was flabbergasted that you killed Voldemort already. Well, the story is about Severus' and Harry's relationship really. Voldemort's defeat is secondary, and it needed to happen before other events could. But there's still a lot planned...we're not close to the end. And yep, Harry's suicidal tendencies will become obvious before much longer.
By the way, I perfectly understand that you find it difficult to write action scenes. It's the same for me, well maybe for me it's the dialogues... anyway... I loved this chapter, really great as usual! Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's funny how we all have our preferences on reading and writing, isn't it?
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! So much needed to happen in this chapter, I was almost scared of writing it, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Well, 21 probably won't happen today, but I'll try to get it up before the weekend.
Again, GREAT WORK! Thanks. Author's Response: Yes, I think I'm famous for cliffies, or maybe infamous is the better term, lol. As for George and his ear, well, at least I'm not killing everyone off like JKR did. I'll try to update again soon, thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, Bellatrix is evil. To me, she's as bad as Voldemort himself, if not worse. And yes, it is good that now no one can question Severus' allegiance. >>>if Harry dies for like less than a minute and is revived would the slave bond be broken??? Interesting question, *evil grin*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked the action part. I was very nervous about writing this chapter; maybe one reason it's so short. Mush and angst coming up, yes!
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I'll probably begin chapter 21 in a couple of days.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! We definitely don't want old Voldie becoming a martyr...he doesn't deserve that. As for dear Bella, she'll be on her way to Azkaban again soon, but she may be one of the villains in the sequel.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try. |
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