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Reviews For Slave Child
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I cried. On the last part I cried. It was so sad, so heartbreaking...poor Severus! Oh, I can't imagine how awful he must feel. But I love that you used the bit from Potion-itis in this. That's one of my absolute favorite stories, and it fits really well here. Oh, wow. Just wow. The whole thing was amazingly wonderful. I loved it. One of my favorite parts was when the Weasleys were trying to get Albus to let them take Harry, and Sev was being so territorial. "He's mine, Weasleys!" That was so in character for Severus. It was perfect. Well, I just wanted to tell you how awesome this was. I can't wait for chapter 22! I'm sure it'll be just as great. Your #1 Fan, -Elise Author's Response: Hi, Elise! Thank you! Yes, Severus does feel badly right now, but though I feel sorry for him, I also think he deserves it, too. He was pretty awful to Harry for years. Heh, I was writing and before I knew it those lines just popped out of Ron's mouth. Then I thought, 'Well, it could fit here, too' so I left it. Yes, Severus is feeling a little insecure around the Weasleys now. It's an area he'll need to work on. Thanks again. I'd love to read more of your stories, too!
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