Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 4:30 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    really great chapter. can't wait for you to continue. how's harry going to be pulled away from his suicidal tendencies?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  How will Harry decide not to kill himself?  I think Severus may play a part in that! 
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 4:09 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY!!!!! :) I LOVED BOTH CHAPTERS 21-2.
    Please please please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm going to work on Chapter 23 this weekend. 
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 12:48 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    ooh i love it! bless harry thinking comforting thoughts about dying, he is so cute in his angst, i loved how he could see through sev's stiff apology to see him feeling uncertain, have i mentioned he is also cute in his own kind of angst!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I think Harry could be perceptive, too, and he's been around Severus enough now to begin to get to understand him. 
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 11:08 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    fantastic chapter. i was wondering tho and this might have been mentioned and i missed it but why does harry think he's never gonna see anyone again? does he think sev will take him away or sumfin????

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well,  Harry thinks he's never going to see everyone again, because he's planning to kill himself very soon.  He's made up his mind that he wants to go on to the afterlife to be with his parents and Sirius, so he won't see his friends again (or at least not until they die one day).
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 9:05 am
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job on this chapter - huzzah for Severus apologising :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 7:53 am
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good job, Kristeh. I feel very uncomfortable everytime Harry (or anybody) mentions the Slavery Spell, which is I'm sure how you meant it to be and so it is very easy to understand how Harry feels. I can't even imagine.

    I am so desperate for Severus to find out what is bothering Harry. I really just want to shout at him to stop worrying about others' coming in between them and pay attention! Arg. LOL, sorry, you're story is sucking me in.

    The last line was my favorite. "...then we can go home." It's such a throw-awy line but it conveys everything. Severus truly does consider Harry to be his and his home to be THEIR HOME. I love it and I was also really glad to see Severus owning up to his mistakes. Harry, poor Harry, is so sad. It breaks me heart. :o(

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Yes, the slavery spell is still a huge deal to Harry.  He hasn't been dwelling on it so much lately, but that's because he's decided that he's going to go be with his parents and Sirius, so he's seeing the slavery spell as just very temporary.  He's still very upset, but it's helped him to think it will all be over soon.

    Yes, Severus really does need to start picking up on the little abnormalities in Harry's behavior.  He is so insecure and jealous that he didn't even think about how out of character it was for Harry to refuse to see his friends...he was just happy that he could take Harry home with him.  And some of it, too, is just that he's so relieved about Voldemort's defeat and that Harry lived, that he's also lettting things slip by him that he might notice at another time.  He's in for a rude awakening, isn't he?

    I loved the last line too.  Having a real home and a real family is so important to Harry.  He just can't see what's right in front of his nose.     

Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 7:48 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so sad to be in Harry's head and hear his suicidal thoughts. Although, for the first time it seems that Harry is maybe beginning to find drawbacks to killing himself.

    And Severus apologized. Yay for that.


    You have really been writing very quickly. Not that I'm complaining. Just wow, so many chapters, with so many words, coming so fast. Just... wow.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Drawbacks may be just beginning to occur to Harry, but he really isn't going to dwell on them.  His mind is made up and whatever the drawbacks, he's so desperate to be with his parents and Sirius that he'll just convince himself that it's worth it. 

    Yep, my SC muse has been working overtime lately.  I hope my other muses will join her.  I've got another project I'm planning out and hoping for inspiration there, too.

Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 7:30 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter,I'm a little worried about how Severus is going to help Harry with his depression when he doesn't know about it but I suppose you will find a way for him to figure it out.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, it's all planned how Severus will find out and how he will react.  In fact, this part of the story is the first part that came to me.  It'll all be happening in the next few chapters. 
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 7:04 am
Reviewer: chmcm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another greag chapter. Thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 22 16 Jul 2008 7:02 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I rather enjoyed this chapter. I'm quite interested in seeing where the suicide aspect of this story will go and how far it will progress until Harry is found out. It's actually quite fascinating (in a morbid kind of way.) Write more soon please; I want to know what happens.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The suicide aspect will progress fairly far, but Severus will discover it pretty soon.

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5