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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry is right now and he is beginning to see that Severus cares, but he doesn't realise how strong Severus' feelings are for him. Harry really sees himself as unwanted...a legacy of living with the Dursleys, and he just finds it hard to believe that Severus could really want him around, enough that he'd be devestated over losing Harry. Right now Harry just doesn't realise how much Severus cares.
I love your story and I appreciate your disclaimers, but since your subject matter (suicide) is such a sensitive topic would you mind also posting a link somewhere to the Hope line? (http://www.hopeline.com/). It's standard media practice, and just in case any of your readers are more affected. I lost several friends to suicide in high school, and worked in advocacy and prevention after that. Thanks a lot, now hurry up and have Sevvy save him already :D Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I will add that link with the next chapter; thanks for the suggestion! I'll try to update within a week.
It was definitely worth it to write out the letters, I think it told us a lot about Harry's state of mind. Severus has come such a long way since the beginning of the story, and I think Harry's starting to think that Sev just might care about him... :) Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to update again within a week. I need a hug, please! My betas will tell you about the computer problems I've had recently and how I almost lost this chapter right close to the end and even more importantly, some papers I need for work. I was pulling my hair out last night. I definitely need a hug. Glad you liked the letters, and Severus really has made a lot of progress, hasn't he?
Author's Response: Thank you! I did enjoy writing the letters, so I hoped they would work.
^that's 3 Just doing some quick beta work :) Author's Response: Hi, Kaity, It's good to hear from you again! Are you back home now? Thank you! I originally forgot to mention the wand, so that's why that sentence says 'two things'. I decided to go back and add the wand, but forgot to change 'two' to 'three'. I went back and fixed it now.
Author's Response: Thank you! severus has come a really long way, hasn't he? And 'anguished' fits Harry perfectly right now, poor kid. But he will begin to heal soon...what's the saying about when you hit rock bottom, there's no where to go but up?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yep, angst overload, isn't it?
i really hope you're not going to kill harry off. i think it would be the end of severus too, at this point. Author's Response: Thank you! I actually quite enjoyed writing the letters, angst lover that I am, lol! I know about Harry thinking the money would be important to Severus. But he just doesn't really understand how much people do love him. He underestimates the love that even people like the Weasleys and Hermione have for him. He's just begun to think that Severus might care a little bit, but he doesn't understand the depth of Severus' feelings, not yet. Will Harry die? Now, you know I can't answer that, lol!
Author's Response: Thank you! Ah, so many questions...I'll try to answer them in the next chapter, okay? Yes, I'm really enjoying Sev and Harry at this point and am looking forward to the next few chapters especially. I wasn't sure about Ron's letter, but Harry is thinking that he's about to die and he does want Ron to know how he feels.
Thanks :) Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, that's Harry's plan at the moment...we'll see what happens in the next chapter. |
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