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Title: Chapter 24 24 Feb 2022 6:53 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    AAAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHHHHJJHH!!!!!!
    OHMGOODNESS!!!
    I was SO! tense! I thought I was going to have a heart attack!
Title: Chapter 24 29 Mar 2016 2:48 am
Reviewer: Amy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww... I love the change in Severus' feelings towards Harry. I've never reviewed this story before, but it has always been one of my favorite Snape and Harry stories. Absolutely amazing. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  That's very kind and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Title: Chapter 24 23 May 2014 7:12 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this kind of moments
Title: Chapter 24 14 Sep 2011 10:01 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was an amazing chapter. I'm so impressed with this story! It brought out serious emotion in me, and that's a sign of quality writing in my opinion. :)

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  This chapter was really the heart and soul of the story, and it was difficult to write, but yet I enjoyed it too, as it was so good to finally have Severus and Harry break through their barriers and find each other.  I'm happy it meant something to you.
Title: Chapter 24 17 Jun 2009 5:12 pm
Reviewer: FailGate (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think my teeth have rotted away from all that fluff :/
    Snape was WAY to loving in this chapter.
    This is extremely OOC... bordering on the unrecognisable.
    *goes and brushes teeth*
    Still, its well written gramatically speaking, which is more than alot of other people can claim.

    Author's Response:

    I disagree.  I believe that Severus could be very loving and tender if he ever decided to allow himself to care for anyone else.  I believe that canon showed he was capable of great love and devotion.

    However, to each his own.  You certainly do not have to read my stories if they do not appeal to you.

     

Title: Chapter 24 28 Feb 2009 10:30 pm
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my goodness
    this chapter made me cry my eyes out
    and the one before, its just soo sad
    i love the story
    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you like it!
Title: Chapter 24 05 Aug 2008 11:04 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this fic is great, very well written and i'm glad severus found harry in time and managed to discuss his feelings, harry has a long life ahead of him

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 04 Aug 2008 12:55 pm
Reviewer: Arwen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I like it very much. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 24 04 Aug 2008 3:48 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww...I'm trying to keep myself from crying. Great chapter. It was very touching. Thanks so much and please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The next chapter is finished, just waiting to hear back from my betas.
Title: Chapter 24 01 Aug 2008 5:54 am
Reviewer: plantsmart731 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was so beautiful. Thank God for Kleenex. I love your writing. Please don't take too long for an update. And that was very wise to post your message at the beginning. I am off to check out your group.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying "Slave Child"!  I'm going to try to update again sometime this weekend.

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