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Reviews For Slave Child
OHMGOODNESS!!! I was SO! tense! I thought I was going to have a heart attack!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's very kind and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This chapter was really the heart and soul of the story, and it was difficult to write, but yet I enjoyed it too, as it was so good to finally have Severus and Harry break through their barriers and find each other. I'm happy it meant something to you.
Snape was WAY to loving in this chapter. This is extremely OOC... bordering on the unrecognisable. *goes and brushes teeth* Still, its well written gramatically speaking, which is more than alot of other people can claim. Author's Response: I disagree. I believe that Severus could be very loving and tender if he ever decided to allow himself to care for anyone else. I believe that canon showed he was capable of great love and devotion. However, to each his own. You certainly do not have to read my stories if they do not appeal to you.
this chapter made me cry my eyes out and the one before, its just soo sad i love the story SG Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you like it!
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Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is finished, just waiting to hear back from my betas.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying "Slave Child"! I'm going to try to update again sometime this weekend. |
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