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Title: Chapter 25 24 Feb 2022 7:02 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! Now I'm gonna cry.
Title: Chapter 25 01 Oct 2017 4:43 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh la la. I love this. At first I thought that Harry was going to slit his wrists. Though I liked that method better, this one was good too! Lets see Ron and Hermione's reactions too!
    You see, your Harry is quite realistic, who wouldn't want to die after all that Harry has suffered. I guess the only thing that kept Harry going on in the canon series is the need to destroy Voldemort. I guess after that Ginny was enough for him to have the will to live. He has suffered quite enough and the Dursleys had always made sure that he had a low self esteem. It was only logical that Harry tried suicide. The slavery spell just added to his list of thing to die for.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story.  Yes, I always thought it was a little unrealistic for Harry to be so resilient after all he had been through, so I wanted to show him being more affected emotionally.  Thankfully, he does have wonderful friends to help him through it all, and now he has Severus as well. 
Title: Chapter 25 14 Aug 2008 8:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I'm quite curious to see what will happen next so I hope you update again soon! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I just sent chapter 26 to my betas, so hopefully it will be up soon. 
Title: Chapter 25 13 Aug 2008 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Ksenezka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am know that "He is very concerned for Harry right now, and is trying to make up for things, to make sure Harry knows he is loved, and is trying to help him heal."
    And that is rigth, but I am just afraid that he will lose his individual.

    Author's Response: Well, I'll try my best!
Title: Chapter 25 13 Aug 2008 1:01 am
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey!
    I really liked this!
    You managed to develop their relationship steadily, not hurrying and it was completely believable. Especially Harry's thoughts and emotions were portrayed wonderfully and you had me crying over his good-bye-letters. I'm just happy, Severus found him in time to rescue him.

    Thanks a lot for this and keep writing,
    ai

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so glad you're enjoying SC!  I'm working on chapter 26 now and hope to update in another day or so.
Title: Chapter 25 10 Aug 2008 6:55 pm
Reviewer: Ksenezka (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think that in this chapter Severus is ... sweet, too. I am afraid that he will lose all his sarcasm soon...

    Author's Response:

    Hi, sorry you think Severus is too sweet.  He is very concerned for Harry right now, and is trying to make up for things, to make sure Harry knows he is loved, and is trying to help him heal.  I will try to let Severus' sarcasm show at times, but it will never be in a mean way towards Harry again.

Title: Chapter 25 07 Aug 2008 6:56 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ah sneaky severus, fetching ron and hermione! is he the one who left the frog (i assume so)? such a tiny gesture and so parental & loving...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Oh, yes, Severus can very sneaky at times, can't he?  But he has Harry's best interest at heart.  He has realised how much Ron and Hermione mean to Harry, that Harry needs them, but at the same time is almost afraid to see them because he just doesn't know how to explain everything to them.  Severus decided that it would be good for Harry and help him to heal if Ron and Hermione are back in his life and if Harry doesn't have to worry about telling them.   
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 10:41 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh! How lovely for Harry at the end there! (: Who was the chocolate frog from?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>Who was the chocolate frog from?

    Mmm, well, there's only a limited number of people it could have been from...more about that later, though it's not really meant to be a big mystery. 

     

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 2:23 pm
Reviewer: iluvchocs (Signed) [Report This]
    I was just thinking about this story as I checked out what had been updated, and then I saw that you'd updated - what a great surprise :D I really liked the way Severus acted in this chapter; he's doing his best to give Harry the emotional reassurance necessary, and to make sure Harry talks about what's important. Thanks very much for the update XD

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Severus is really trying very hard to meet Harry's needs, including bringing his friends to him.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 7:35 am
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a very sweet chapter,I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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