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Reviews For Slave Child
You see, your Harry is quite realistic, who wouldn't want to die after all that Harry has suffered. I guess the only thing that kept Harry going on in the canon series is the need to destroy Voldemort. I guess after that Ginny was enough for him to have the will to live. He has suffered quite enough and the Dursleys had always made sure that he had a low self esteem. It was only logical that Harry tried suicide. The slavery spell just added to his list of thing to die for. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story. Yes, I always thought it was a little unrealistic for Harry to be so resilient after all he had been through, so I wanted to show him being more affected emotionally. Thankfully, he does have wonderful friends to help him through it all, and now he has Severus as well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I just sent chapter 26 to my betas, so hopefully it will be up soon.
And that is rigth, but I am just afraid that he will lose his individual. Author's Response: Well, I'll try my best!
I really liked this! You managed to develop their relationship steadily, not hurrying and it was completely believable. Especially Harry's thoughts and emotions were portrayed wonderfully and you had me crying over his good-bye-letters. I'm just happy, Severus found him in time to rescue him. Thanks a lot for this and keep writing, ai Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying SC! I'm working on chapter 26 now and hope to update in another day or so.
Author's Response: Hi, sorry you think Severus is too sweet. He is very concerned for Harry right now, and is trying to make up for things, to make sure Harry knows he is loved, and is trying to help him heal. I will try to let Severus' sarcasm show at times, but it will never be in a mean way towards Harry again.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh, yes, Severus can very sneaky at times, can't he? But he has Harry's best interest at heart. He has realised how much Ron and Hermione mean to Harry, that Harry needs them, but at the same time is almost afraid to see them because he just doesn't know how to explain everything to them. Severus decided that it would be good for Harry and help him to heal if Ron and Hermione are back in his life and if Harry doesn't have to worry about telling them.
Author's Response: Thank you! >>>Who was the chocolate frog from? Mmm, well, there's only a limited number of people it could have been from...more about that later, though it's not really meant to be a big mystery.
Author's Response: Thank you! Severus is really trying very hard to meet Harry's needs, including bringing his friends to him. Glad you liked it!
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